Question

9．假如你是English Corner 欄目的編輯李華，有個(gè)叫李明的學(xué)生向你請(qǐng)教如何學(xué)好英語(yǔ)．下面請(qǐng)你就如何學(xué)好英語(yǔ)以書面的形式給他提出幾條建議．
1．每天早上朗讀英語(yǔ)單詞、句子及短文，盡量多記一些有用的句子并背誦一些短文章；
2．經(jīng)常進(jìn)行大量的課外閱讀；
3．每天應(yīng)安排一些時(shí)間進(jìn)行聽力訓(xùn)練；
4．只要你能充分利用業(yè)余時(shí)間來(lái)學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)，你的英語(yǔ)很快會(huì)得到提高．
注意：1．不逐條翻譯，詞數(shù)不少于100；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭語(yǔ)和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Li Ming，
I'm an editor of English Corner．I've received your letter asking me to give you some advice on how to learn English well．
                ．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 （高分句型一）Moreover，it is suggested that you read a great variety of books after school．
該句型使用了It is+過(guò)去分詞+that…是一個(gè)主語(yǔ)從句，據(jù)建議…另外suggest做建議從句使用虛擬語(yǔ)氣，即should do．
（高分句型二） As long as you can make good use of your spare time to learn English，surely，you will make rapid progress．
as long as意思是只要，引導(dǎo) 一個(gè)條件狀語(yǔ)從句，主語(yǔ)時(shí)態(tài)為一般將來(lái)時(shí)，從句一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．
Just as the saying goes，（高分句型三）"Where there is a will，there is a way．"
該句引用了諺語(yǔ)"有志者事竟成"，增強(qiáng)了語(yǔ)言感染力．
高級(jí)詞匯短語(yǔ)：suggest 建議；memorize記憶；a great variety of 各種各樣的；make good use of 充分利用；
連接過(guò)渡詞使用：First of all首先；Meanwhile與此同時(shí)；Moreover而且；Last but not least最后但同樣重要；

解答 Dear Li Ming，
       I'm an editor of English Corner．I've received your letter asking me to give you some advice on how to learn English well．Here are some of my suggestions．
  （建議一）First of all，I suggest you read the English words，sentences and short articles aloud every morning．（建議二）Meanwhile，you should try to memorize the useful sentences as many as possible and recite some short passages as well．（高分句型一）Moreover，（建議三）it is suggested that you read a great variety of books after school．（建議四）Last but not least，a certain amount of time should be spent on listening． （高分句型二） As long as you can make good use of your spare time to learn English，surely，you will make rapid progress．Just as the saying goes，（高分句型三）"Where there is a will，there is a way．"If you stick to your dream and study hard，I'm sure you will be successful in your English study．（表達(dá)自己對(duì)Li Ming的信心）
      All the best．
                                                                                                                                                                                      Yours
                                                                                                                                                                                       Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文實(shí)際上是對(duì)考生的思路以及文章的寫作范圍給出了明確的限定，因此考生在寫作時(shí)，應(yīng)在保證內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)齊全的同時(shí)進(jìn)行合理而又緊扣主題的發(fā)揮；要根據(jù)提綱全面構(gòu)思文章內(nèi)容，根據(jù)內(nèi)容構(gòu)思詞語(yǔ)和句型結(jié)構(gòu)；注意句子的時(shí)態(tài)，詞語(yǔ)的豐富和句型的多樣性．