Question

【題目】在今年五月一日，5.4萬游客游覽世界文化遺產(chǎn)—長城，并留下18.2噸垃圾。因此有人對近幾年僅五一當天游客在長城丟垃圾現(xiàn)象做了調(diào)查，結果如下：

（寫作內(nèi)容）

1. 簡要闡述上述圖文信息；

2. 談談你對這一現(xiàn)象的看法；

3. 就如何保護世界遺產(chǎn)給出你的建議。

（寫作要求）

1. 詞數(shù)：120左右。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；

2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱。

On May 1 this year, 54,000 tourists visited the Great Wall, a World Heritage Site, leaving behind 18.2 tons of garbage, which aroused public discussion.

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Answer 1

【答案】On May 1 this year, 54,000 tourists visited the Great Wall, a World Heritage Site, leaving behind 18.2 tons of garbage, which aroused public discussion. Therefore, some people conducted a survey on the phenomenon that tourists dropped litter on the Great Wall just on May 1 in recent years, finding that the amount of the rubbish left behind is increasing.

On my personal note, the Great Wall, which is a symbol of China, plays a significant part in the history of our country. It can enhance nation’s sense of pride, self-confidence and patriotic enthusiasm. Hence, it’s our responsibility to protect it, leaving it as it was 2000 years ago. When visiting it, tourists should take away rubbish.

With regard to protecting World Heritage Sites, we’d better educate people, raising their awareness of their value. What’s more, substantial measures should be taken, such as restricting the number of visitors. (123)

【解析】

這是一篇圖表類寫作。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，要求寫一篇短文；在今年五月一日，5.4萬游客游覽世界文化遺產(chǎn)—長城，并留下18.2噸垃圾。因此有人對近幾年僅五一當天游客在長城丟垃圾現(xiàn)象做了調(diào)查。要求簡要闡述上述圖文信息； 談談你對這一現(xiàn)象的看法； 就如何保護世界遺產(chǎn)給出你的建議。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關鍵詞（組），如：the Great Wall（長城）；tons of（無數(shù)；許多）；aroused public discussion（引起公眾討論）；conduct（組織；實施）；a symbol of（象征）；significant（重大的）；enhance（增加）等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。