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根據(jù)下面的英文提示，結(jié)合生活中的實(shí)例，談?wù)勀銓κ�敗的看法�?br />In fact ,there aren't always bright sunshine and gentle breeze, birds' singing and flowers fragrant in our daily life . We have so many failures and hardships that someone will be disappointed and give up the hope of success, but life is what you make it.
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Success will be gained after times of failures as long as we are good at drawing lessons from failures or mistakes and stick to what we are doing. There is a message carried in the proverb "failure is the mother of success ."
I will take my experiences of learning as an example. When I began to learn English, I was so slow and clumsy that I read words wrongly from to time. My pronunciation made me laughed at by my classmates. But I didn't give up. I keep practising reading English aloud every day. And my teacher gave me a helping hand, getting me right whenever I made an error. Finally I even got a chance to take part in the English speaking competition and won the first prize.
In a word, as long as we don't lose heart and keep on trying. We are sure to go through failure and achieve our goals.

試題分析：本題屬于半開放性作文，要求考生以失敗為主題寫篇議論文。話題是同學(xué)們很熟悉的話題，與現(xiàn)實(shí)生活的聯(lián)系也很緊密�？梢耘e自身經(jīng)歷過的失敗，再講述自己是如何戰(zhàn)勝失敗的，如何樹立正確對待失敗的態(tài)度。文章最后一定要使用Failure is the mother of success這個(gè)諺語來闡述失敗與成功的關(guān)系。
點(diǎn)評;本題的話題有很強(qiáng)的可寫性，也很貼近考生生活，本文的關(guān)鍵在于闡述如何正確面對失敗，以及失敗與成功的關(guān)系。