Question

3．根據(jù)下面的提示，以"My healthy lifestyle"為題寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文．
提示：
1．早睡早起，睡眠充足；晚上不熬夜（Don't stay up late at night）；
2．良好的飲食習(xí)慣；不喝酒，不抽煙；
3．和朋友相處融洽；
4．樂(lè)于助人．
要求：1．開(kāi)頭部分已寫(xiě)好，你只需接著寫(xiě)．
2．所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容必須包括以上提示，語(yǔ)句通順，合乎邏輯．
3．詞數(shù)：100個(gè)左右．
My healthy lifestyle
I am the strongest of all the students in my class because I exercise every day．                  ．

Answer 1

分析 本文屬于提綱作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題．平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類(lèi)似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果．
亮點(diǎn)句型一：I hardly ever eat junk food because my mother tells me that it's not good for my health．我很少吃垃圾食品，因?yàn)槲覌寢尭嬖V我這對(duì)我的健康不好．本句中because引導(dǎo)的是原因狀語(yǔ)從句，這個(gè)原因狀語(yǔ)從句中that從句做tell的賓語(yǔ)．
亮點(diǎn)句型二：Thinking more of others makes me become popular among students．多思考別人使我在學(xué)生中變得受歡迎．本句中運(yùn)用了動(dòng)名詞Thinking在句中做主語(yǔ)．

解答 One possible version：
   I am the strongest of all the students in my class because I exercise every day．I get up early in the morning and go to bed before 10 o'clock every night．I never stay up late at night．Enough sleep and exercise help me stay healthy．It's very important to eat a balanced diet．I think I have a good eating habit．I try to eat less meat and more vegetables and fruit every day．I hardly ever eat junk food because my mother tells me that it's not good for my health．（亮點(diǎn)句型一）I have never touched cigarette and alcohol．At school，I get on well with my classmates and friends．I often help them with study if they need me．Thinking more of others makes me become popular among students．（亮點(diǎn)句型二）So you see，my healthy lifestyle makes my life healthy and colorful．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．