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14．第二節(jié)　書面表達(dá)
假定你是一位即將畢業(yè)的高三學(xué)生，學(xué)校將為高一新生舉辦主題為"What to learn in senior high school？"的英語沙龍活動，特邀你談?wù)勛约旱捏w會．請根據(jù)以下提示準(zhǔn)備一份英語發(fā)言稿．
1．學(xué)習(xí)：有效地學(xué)習(xí)，學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣等；2．做人：與人友好相處等．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．發(fā)言稿開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：efficiently（高效地）effective（有效的）
Good morning，everyone!It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school．
Good morning，everyone!It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school．（高分句型一）
In the coming three years，our school life will be challenging．On the one hand，we should learn to learn efficiently，adopting some effective methods．As a matter of fact，developing a good study habit is of great importance．（高分句型二）It really benefits me a lot to preview lessons，get actively involved in class and review what has been taught．（高分句型三）
On the other hand，in senior high school，we are supposed to learn how to get along well with others．We ought to respect teachers and be friendly with classmates．It is with kindness that we can create a friendly atmosphere．（高分句型四）
Last but not least，no pains，no gains．I'm sure if we can really make great efforts，we can realize our dreams in the future．
Thank you!
Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 本次作文要求學(xué)校將為高一新生舉辦主題為"What to learn in senior high school？"的英語沙龍活動，特邀你談?wù)勛约旱捏w會．請根據(jù)提示準(zhǔn)備一份英語發(fā)言稿．要點(diǎn)包括：1．學(xué)習(xí)：有效地學(xué)習(xí)，學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣等；2．做人：與人友好相處等．故既要完成任務(wù)，又要兼顧形式的要求．
寫作亮點(diǎn)：本篇條理清楚，要點(diǎn)全面，結(jié)構(gòu)連貫．其句式上的變化既使得文章生動而流暢，也體現(xiàn)了作者駕馭句式的能力．例如：非謂語動詞做主語developing a good study habit賓語從句what has been taught．主語從句that we can create a friendly atmosphere．it做形式主語It is with kindness that we can create a friendly atmosphere．運(yùn)用了benefits，be supposed to，get along well with等詞匯及On the one hand，On the other hand，As a matter of fact，Last but not least等連接詞．

解答 Good morning，everyone!It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school．（高分句型一）
    In the coming three years，our school life will be challenging．On the one hand，we should learn to learn efficiently，adopting some effective methods．As a matter of fact，developing a good study habit is of great importance．（高分句型二）It really benefits me a lot to preview lessons，get actively involved in class and review what has been taught．（高分句型三）
    On the other hand，in senior high school，we are supposed to learn how to get along well with others．We ought to respect teachers and be friendly with classmates．It is with kindness that we can create a friendly atmosphere．（高分句型四）
    Last but not least，no pains，no gains．I'm sure if we can really make great efforts，we can realize our dreams in the future．
    Thank you!

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．