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18．假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（^），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
      2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
When I was in kindergarten，I swallowed the black seeds while eat watermelon．My teacher once told me what a watermelon would grow in my stomach if I ate the black seeds by an accident．I was very frightened that I started crying．When I tell my mom and dad about the black seeds，she laughed at me．Because that，I was always afraid to eat watermelon until I was about eight year old．To this day，whenever I get watermelon with any black seeds，I will spit them out even that I know it's possible for a watermelon to grow in my stomach．

Answer 1

分析 本文主要講述作者小時(shí)候的一件趣事．一次偶然吞下了一些西瓜籽，便擔(dān)心西瓜會(huì)在胃里生長(zhǎng)，因?yàn)槔蠋熯@樣說過．后來，即使知道西瓜不可能在胃里生長(zhǎng)，也要吐出黑色的西瓜籽．

解答 When I was in kindergarten，I swallowed the black seeds while eat watermelon．My teacher once told mewhat a watermelon would grow in my stomach if I ate the black seeds by an accident．I was very frightened that I started crying．When I tell my mom and dad about the black seeds，she laughed at me．Because∧that，I was always afraid to eat watermelon until I was about eight year old．To this day，whenever I get watermelon with any black seeds，I will spit them out even that I know it's possible for a watermelon to grow in my stomach．
詳解：
1．eat改為eating 考查現(xiàn)在分詞．I與eat之間是主謂關(guān)系，用現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)．
2．what改為that或去掉what 考查連詞．賓語(yǔ)從句a watermelon would grow in my stomach是完整的，用連詞that連接或去掉what．
3．去掉an 考查固定搭配．by accident意為"偶然地"，是固定搭配．
4．very改為so 考查固定搭配．so…that…意為"如此/這么…以致于…"，句型中的so是副詞，常常用來修飾形容詞或副詞，常用句型為：主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)+so+adj．/adv．+that從句．
5．tell改為told 考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)．全文講述的是過去的事情，用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)．
6．she改為they 考查代詞．they指代my mom and dad．
7．加of 考查詞語(yǔ)用法．because of意為"因?yàn)?，是介詞短語(yǔ)，后接名詞或代詞作賓語(yǔ)；because意為"因?yàn)?，是連詞，后接句子．此處用介詞，因?yàn)楹竺娼拥氖谴�詞that．
8．year改為years 考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)．years old意為"…歲（指年齡）"，當(dāng)其前的數(shù)詞修飾語(yǔ)大于一時(shí)用復(fù)數(shù)形式．
9．that改為though/if 考查連詞．even though/if意為"即使，縱然"，是固定搭配．
10．possible改為impossible 考查形容詞．根據(jù)句意：我知道西瓜不可能在我的胃里生長(zhǎng)．用形容詞impossible．

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