Question

18．假如你是中學(xué)生李華，你校外教Bob近期準(zhǔn)備回美國度寒假．你班同學(xué)決定舉辦晚會為他送行．請你根據(jù)以下提示，用英語寫一封e-mail，告知他相關(guān)活動(dòng)安排．
1．目的：向他表達(dá)謝意；
2．時(shí)間：本周五晚上6：30開始，預(yù)計(jì)持續(xù)1個(gè)小時(shí)；
3．地點(diǎn)：學(xué)校報(bào)告廳；
4．活動(dòng)：同學(xué)們一起唱英文歌，并贈送親手制作的禮物和卡片等．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右．
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
3．開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Bob，
With winter vacation drawing near，we know you are going back to America for the holiday．                 
Yours truly，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
 To express our gratitude for you excellent teaching in our school and your love for our class，we've decided to have a farewell party for you
高分句型二：
At the party，you will present you some gift and cards，which are mostly made by ourselves
句型一 To express our gratitude for you excellent…該部分使用了不定式位于句首做目的狀語，表明意圖
句型二  which are mostly made by ourselves 該句是一個(gè)由which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，which在句中充當(dāng)主語，替代前面出現(xiàn)的先行詞gift and cards

解答 Dear Bob，
   With winter vacation drawing near，we know you are going back to America for the holiday．We'll miss you very much during your absence．
   To express our gratitude for you excellent teaching in our school and your love for our class，we've decided to have a farewell party for you．（高分句型一）（說明寫信目的）The party will start at 6：30 on Friday evening in the lecture hall and will probably last about an hour．At the party，you will present you some gift and cards，which are mostly made by ourselves．（高分句型二）
   We wish you a pleasant journey back home!We are also expecting you to come back to us again soon．（給予祝愿）
                                                                                                                                     Yours truly，
                                                                                                                                       Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 該書面表達(dá)為提綱類，該類作文一般規(guī)定了考生的寫作思路，羅列出了相應(yīng)的寫作要點(diǎn)．考生在平時(shí)應(yīng)注意積累相應(yīng)的詞匯和短語，在寫作時(shí)盡量做到將要點(diǎn)與主題緊密結(jié)合，用準(zhǔn)確的、簡潔明了的語言將作文展示出來．