分析 本文是話題類提綱作文,根據(jù)所提供的材料信息,寫一篇短文.學(xué)校最近開展了創(chuàng)建"平安校園"的活動,就如何創(chuàng)建"平安校園"在班會上談?wù)勛约旱南敕ǎ?br />寫作要點(diǎn):1.安全意識的重要性; 2.校內(nèi)潛在的一些人身安全隱患,如:體育運(yùn)動時,和同學(xué)發(fā)生矛盾時等情況;3.你對解決這些問題的積極建議.
時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時.人稱以第一和第三人稱為主.
重要短語:mean sth(意味著…),launch the campaign(發(fā)起活動),be aware that(所以),come first (位于第一名),get injured(有…問題),fall to the ground(摔倒在地…),get hurt(保護(hù)環(huán)境),have disagreement with…(,不同意…),cause sth(引起…),follow one's advice(聽從某人的意見),solve the disagreement with…(解決分歧).
【高分句型一】
1.Whether our school campus is a safe place to stay on means a lot to both teachers and students.
此處是由連接詞"whether"引導(dǎo)的主語從句,整個句子的謂語動詞為"means",連詞"whether"在主語從句意為"是否".
【高分句型二】
2.And the campaign"safety at school"launched①recently will make us aware ②that safety should always come first③whatever we do.
①此處是由過去分詞"launched"作名詞"campaign"后置定語.
②此處是由連詞"that"引導(dǎo)的賓語從句.
③此處是由疑問代詞"whatever"引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句,疑問代詞"whatever"在從句中作賓語.
【高分句型三】
3.When decorating our classroom standing on the desk,we might fall to the ground and get hurt.
此處為時間狀語從句中的省略,結(jié)構(gòu)為"When+現(xiàn)在分詞",主句為"we might fall to the ground and get hurt".
【高分句型四】
4.I think,to follow our PE teachers'advice can avoid unnecessary injures in PE class.
此處為動詞不定式作主語,句子的謂語動詞為"can avoid","to follow our PE teachers'advice can avoid unnecessary injures in PE class"為動詞"think"的賓語.
【高分句型五】
5.Besides,①quarrelling or even fighting is not a wise choice to solve the disagreement with our classmates②since it may bring suffering and pain to us mentally and physically.
①此處為"動名詞"作主語,句子的謂語動詞用單數(shù).
②此處為連詞"since"原因狀語從句,主句為"quarrelling or even fighting is not a wise choice to solve the disagreement with our classmates".
解答 Dear classmates,
Whether our school campus is a safe place to stay on means a lot to both teachers and students.【高分句型一】And the campaign"safety at school"launched recently will make us aware that safety should always come first whatever we do.(安全意識的重要性)【高分句型二】
Accidents can happen easily at school.When doing sports,we might get injured.When decorating our classroom standing on the desk,we might fall to the ground and get hurt.【高分句型三】When having disagreement with our classmates,we might quarrel and cause fighting.(潛在的一些人身安全隱患)
So,I think,to follow our PE teachers'advice can avoid unnecessary injures in PE class.【高分句型四】And it will be helpful to have some students around when we have to do things on high places.Besides,quarrelling or even fighting is not a wise choice to solve the disagreement with our classmates since it may bring suffering and pain to us mentally and physically.【高分句型五】(建議)
Thanks.
點(diǎn)評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn).寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯關(guān)系,盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次,平時需注意積累短語和重要句型.
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