Question

16．請你從如圖兩幅漫畫中任選一幅，通過電子郵件推薦給學(xué)校英文�？�，說明漫畫主題，根據(jù)個人經(jīng)歷，論述推薦理由．

注意：1．詞數(shù)100字左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，使行文連貫、完整．
Dear Editor，
I'd like to recommend an interesting cartoon．A boy running to his parents after the summer camp ending，says he learend washing，dressing and sleeping alone．This cartoon shows the importance of children's independent and propaganda agood way to educate children．
Nowadays many parents have a common sense that their children are so precious to them so they always try their best to give their children a happy and meaningful life．On one hand，these parents care and protect their children，however，on the other hand they may do harm to their children．
As far as I am concerned，it is necessary that parents should give their children more space and freedom so that their children may become more independent．What's more，it is a good way to let their children join a summer camp for children must face something by their own，such as，their relationship with friends，theircost and saving and so on．A good case in point，parents may encourage their children to take part-time jobs during summer or winter holiday．By doing this，I believe，these children may become more independent，brave and responsible．
In summary，parents should know better that an independent，responsible and brave person is able to adapt society better．．

Answer 1

分析 本篇看圖寫作讓考生選擇其一．圖一畫了一個小男孩參加夏令營而學(xué)會了獨立生活，圖二則諷刺了虛假廣告．因此考生應(yīng)從自己感興趣和有話可寫的一個入手，可以使用舉例，或者邏輯分析的方法來豐富作文的內(nèi)容．注意使用一般現(xiàn)在時，以及恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞．
重要短語：
 do harm to，對…有害，a good case in point，一個恰當(dāng)?shù)睦�子，in summary，總之
高分句子：
As far as I am concerned，it is necessary that parents should give their children more space and freedom so that their children may become more independent．本句含有重要句型，it is necessary that，..是必要的．

解答 I'd like to recommend an interesting cartoon．A boy running to his parents after the summer camp ending，says he learend washing，dressing and sleeping alone．（描述畫面內(nèi)容）This cartoon shows the importance of children's independent and propaganda a good way to educate children．（說明介紹原因）
     Nowadays many parents have a common sense that their children are so precious to them so they always try their best to give their children a happy and meaningful life．On one hand，these parents care and protect their children，however，on the other hand they may do harm to their children．（引出現(xiàn)象）
     As far as I am concerned，it is necessary that parents should give their children more space and freedom so that their children may become more independent．（高分句型）What's more，it is a good way to let their children join  a summer camp for children must face something by their own，such as，their relationship with friends，their cost and saving and so on．A good case in point，parents may encourage their children to take part-time jobs during summer or winter holiday．By doing this，I believe，these children may become more independent，brave and responsible．（敘述自己觀點）
     In summary，parents should know better that an independent，responsible and brave person is able to adapt society better．（總結(jié)主題）

點評 在完成圖表作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣才可以更好的駕馭．同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體．