Question

8．請根據(jù)以下提示，結(jié)合你在生活中的事例，就"What is happiness？"這一話題，用英語寫一篇短文．
With people's living standards improved，more and more people have private cars，big houses．But we often hear them complain about their lack of happiness．Then what on earth can give us happiness？Is it wealth，power，health…
注意：1．不得照抄英語提示語．
2．除詩歌外，文體不限．
3．內(nèi)容必須結(jié)合生活中的一個事例，側(cè)重某一個方面．
4．文中不得透露個人姓名和學(xué)校名稱．
5．詞數(shù)為120左右．

Answer 1

分析 本題特點是"讀寫結(jié)合"，考查考生閱讀理解、要點概括、用英語敘事說理等多方面能力．解答此類試題，除了要注意一般寫作規(guī)范之外，還要準(zhǔn)確理解所給文章的中心思想并準(zhǔn)確予以解讀和概括．
亮點句型一：what surprised me most was that the old lady didn't cry．最讓我吃驚的是老太太沒有哭．本句中what surprised me most是主語從句，引導(dǎo)詞what在從句中做主語； 從句that the old lady didn't cry在句中做表語．
亮點句型二：She looked after several children living nearby，some of whom even has been admitted into famous universities．她照看幾個住在附近的孩子，有些甚至被列入名牌大學(xué)．這是一個非限制性定語從句，關(guān)系代詞whom在從句指代先行詞children．

解答 I'll never forget an old lady who was my neighbor．She lived in a small house alone．It was said that her husband and her son had died in a traffic accident．How bitter her life was!I had thought she would lock her door and bury herself in sorrow all day long．But what surprised me most was that the old lady didn't cry．（亮點句型一）Instead，she often helped others with a smile．Whenever it snowed，she was always the first to clean the paths．She looked after several children living nearby，some of whom even has been admitted into famous universities．（亮點句型二）I often remember the stories she told us and her kind smile．Perhaps she is unlucky，but I think she is a happy person．Her life is full of laughter and love．
    Now I know what happiness is．It means kindness，love and unselfishness．Above all，only bringing happiness to others can make yourself get it，which can't be bought by money．liang

點評 讀寫任務(wù)寫作是將閱讀與寫作有機結(jié)合起來，要求考生在讀懂文章信息的基礎(chǔ)上，按照要求有條理地寫出所要表達的內(nèi)容，寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型，提高文章的檔次．