Question

下面短文中有10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(Λ)，并在其下面寫上該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。
注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。
When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred Yuan. I asked my father the money. But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleasing when I showed him the money a month after. He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine what happy I was when I rode to school on my own bicycle.

Answer 1

小題1:friend → friends
小題2:it → one
小題3:that →which
小題4:加上for
小題5:he → I
小題6:去掉the
小題7:pleasing → pleased
小題8:after → later
小題9:gives → gave
小題10:what →how

試題分析：
小題1:… most of my friend had bicycles. 改為friends. （most of + 可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù) / 不可數(shù)名詞）
小題2:I hoped I could also have it. 改為one （it指代同一件東西；one指代同一類事物）
小題3:…, that was only one hundred Yuan. 改為which （that不引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句）
小題4:I asked my father ∧ the money. 加上for （向某人索要某物：ask sb. for .sth.）
小題5:He should find the other half myself. 改為I （父親說給我一半買車的錢，另一半必須“我”自己想辦法）
小題6:So I went to sell newspapers after the school. 去掉the （after school, 固定用法，意為“放學(xué)后”）
小題7:My father was pleasing when… 改為pleased （pleased, 感到高興；pleasing, 令人高興）
小題8:…when I showed him the money a month after. 改為later （later, 副詞，意為“后來”； after, 介詞或連詞，后接名詞或句子）
小題9:He gives me the other fifty. 改為gave （時態(tài)錯誤。父親“給”錢發(fā)生于過去）
小題10:You can imagine what happy I was… 改為how （what是代詞，后接名詞；how是副詞，后接形容詞或副詞。happy是形容詞，前面應(yīng)用how）