Question

3．In your English class，your teacher shows you the following picture．You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it．

Answer 1

分析 本篇看圖作文中，畫了一個人面對掌聲與贊美時產(chǎn)生了內(nèi)心活動，但并未說明想的是什么．因此考生可以圍繞面對贊美時我們應(yīng)當(dāng)如何做的話題來寫作．可以使用舉例，或者邏輯分析的方法來寫作，豐富作文的內(nèi)容．注意使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞．
重要短語：
 adapt to，適應(yīng)，slap sb．in the face，扇某人耳光，
高分句子：
1．However，a troupe's workers surprisely found out that，whenever hearing applause from the thunder，the master behind the scenes will slap him in the face，本句中含有that引導(dǎo)的定語從句，從句中又含有條件狀語從句．
2．I do this just to remind myself to awake，which can bring more success．本句中含有which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句．

解答 The society  is very complex，the social people are more complex．Life in the complex society，imperceptible，we learn to adapt to the society，peace of mind treats people or good or malicious praise and criticism，can become the true of the wise．（引出話題）
    Praised，can not be conceited or rash more success．A master of art after years of hard work，makes  a great success．However，a troupe's workers surprisely found out that，whenever hearing applause from the thunder，the master behind the scenes will slap him in the face，and the more enthusiastic applause cheering，the louder he will slap．When he can not help asking the master，the master open to the answer：when a person is surrounded by praise，it is very easy to get lost，I do this just to remind myself to awake，which can bring more success．（舉出事例）
    When we received praise，is joyful，however，the joy may destroyed future．（總結(jié)文章）

點(diǎn)評 半開放性作文留給考生發(fā)揮的空間比較大．一般只提供一個話題或一個圖片，要求考生合理地進(jìn)行想象．考生在寫作時，需要做到以下幾點(diǎn)：第一、認(rèn)真審題，把握所有信息．第二、確定體裁，把握行文格式．第三、羅列提綱，思考表達(dá)方式．第四、組織語言，展開寫作． 寫作時，運(yùn)用熟悉的英語詞匯、句型等；要盡量運(yùn)用多樣化的句式，注意長短句的結(jié)合、簡單句和復(fù)合句的結(jié)合；要注意上下文的銜接，過渡要自然．第五、認(rèn)真檢查，查漏補(bǔ)缺．