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4．假如你將在英語(yǔ)課前五分鐘的演講中向同學(xué)們介紹你的偶像宋仲基，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下信息寫(xiě)一篇演講稿．
1．宋仲基（Song Joong Ki），生于1985年，因他在《太陽(yáng)的后裔》（Descendants of the Sun）中扮演的男主角而受到中國(guó)觀眾的喜愛(ài)；
2．一名有聰明才智的演員，學(xué)習(xí)成績(jī)優(yōu)異，曾以全韓國(guó)前十的成績(jī)被成均館大學(xué)（SKKU）錄��；
3．他的勤奮和努力促成了他在演藝事業(yè)上的成功；
4．你崇拜他的原因：堅(jiān)持夢(mèng)想，為了實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想而努力奮斗的精神（可自行補(bǔ)充）
注意：詞數(shù)120左右．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于提綱類(lèi)作文，根據(jù)提示信息假如你將在英語(yǔ)課前五分鐘的演講中向同學(xué)們介紹你的偶像宋仲基，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下信息寫(xiě)一篇演講稿，寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：宋仲基（Song Joong Ki），生于1985年，因他在《太陽(yáng)的后裔》（Descendants of the Sun）中扮演的男主角而受到中國(guó)觀眾的喜愛(ài)；一名有聰明才智的演員，學(xué)習(xí)成績(jī)優(yōu)異，曾以全韓國(guó)前十的成績(jī)被成均館大學(xué)（SKKU）錄��；他的勤奮和努力促成了他在演藝事業(yè)上的成功；你崇拜他的原因：堅(jiān)持夢(mèng)想，為了實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想而努力奮斗的精神（可自行補(bǔ)充）2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě)．本文寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：feel honored to非常榮幸地去做；at present目前，現(xiàn)在；do well in 在…方面做得好；be admitted to被錄��；As far as I'm concerned以我的觀點(diǎn)來(lái)看；hold on to堅(jiān)持；
 I feel honored to stand here to deliver a speech for you，in which I want to introduce to you my idol--Song Joong Ki--an intelligent and diligent Korean actor．（高分句型一）
When in school，he always did well in his study so that he was admitted to the SKKU，with his academic grade ranking top ten．（高分句型二）
 In the entertainment business，he can still hold on to his dream and try his best to attain his ambition，which is why I adore him a great deal．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear classmates，
       I feel honored to stand here to deliver a speech for you，in which I want to introduce to you my idol--Song Joong Ki--an intelligent and diligent Korean actor．（高分句型一）
       Born in an ordinary family in 1985，Song is fairly popular with Chinese audience at present for his wonderful performance in Descendants of the Sun．When in school，he always did well in his study so that he was admitted to the SKKU，with his academic grade ranking top ten．（高分句型二）As far as I'm concerned，it is his hard work that contributes to his success in his study and his career．In the entertainment business，he can still hold on to his dream and try his best to attain his ambition，which is why I adore him a great deal．（高分句型三）
       My fellow classmates，let's set our goals and keep it up，and I believe we will also live up to our dream some day!

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．