Question

4．假設你是李明，你的英國筆友Jack給你來信說他最近身體發(fā)胖，容易生病，并詢問你是如何保持身體健康的．請參考下面的內容給他回信，向他介紹你的飲食習慣，提出建議．要點如下：
1．多吃水果、蔬菜，少吃糖、奶油和巧克力等．
2．多鍛煉，運動是健康的保證．
注意：
1．可以適當增加細節(jié)．不要逐條翻譯．
2．詞數(shù)在100左右．
3．開頭結尾已給出．
Dear Jack，
I am glad to receive your letter．And I am sorry to hear that you are putting on weight and often get ill these days．
                                 ．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一封書信，根據(jù)題目要求向Jack介紹你的飲食習慣，就Jack的身體發(fā)胖提出建議，寫作要點包括1．多吃水果、蔬菜，少吃糖、奶油和巧克力等．2．多鍛煉，運動是健康的保證．寫作時以第一人稱為主，主要時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時．
重點詞匯：put on weight （發(fā)胖）；saying（諺語）；in one's opinion（在某人看來）；at the same time（同時）；take part in （參加）；keep sb fit（使某人健康）；Look forward to （期待，盼望）．
高分句型：1．There is a saying：You are what you eat．
                 運用諺語增強句子的說服力．
                 2．Remember to have food ①which is low in sugar and fat，②because they can cause you to put on weight easily．
                  ①which引導一個定語從句；②because引導一個原因狀語從句．
                 3．I think perhaps the most important thing is①to take part in many kinds of exercises，②whih can keep you fit．
                  ①不定式短語to take part in many kinds of exercises在句中作表語；②which引導一個非限制性定語從句，關系代詞which指代上一句提到的事情．

解答 Dear Jack，
I am glad to receive your letter．And I am sorry to hear that you are puting on weight and often get ill these days．
There is a saying：You are what you eat（高分句型一）．Eating habits are very important to our health．In my opinion，you should pay more attetion to what you eat．Remember to have food which is low in sugar and fat，because they can cause you to put on weight easily（高分句型二）．Be sure to have more fruit and vegetables and，at the same time，avoid eating too much cream and chocolate．I think perhaps the most important thing is to take part in many kinds of exercises，whih can keep you fit（高分句型三）．
I hope this will give you some help．
Looking forward to hearing from you．

點評 書面表達題考查的是英語的應用能力．寫作時要注意：要點的提煉要全；關鍵短語和句型要寫對；過渡詞和過渡短語要自然，通順地道；最后還要注意人稱和時態(tài)使用要正確．