Question

【題目】假如你是李華， 你的英國朋友Tom 將來你家共度除夕，你打算當天下午去地鐵站

接他。請你用英文寫一封電子郵件，告知他相關信息。你們?nèi)�家都歡迎他。

1. 接他的時間和地點：2月18 日下午 4點，地鐵四號線中關村站西北出口；

2. 晚上的主要安排：看春晚、包餃子、放鞭炮。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)不少于100。

2. 可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

3. 開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tom,

How is it going? I’m excited to hear that you will come to China to spend the Chinese New Year’s Eve. My family expects your arrival so much. And I am glad to tell you the arrangements during your visit in Beijing in advance.

I will meet you at 4 o’clock on the afternoon of February 18th. You can arrive at northwestern entrance of Zhongguancun Station of Subway Line 4. If you have some trouble in finding the right way, you can seek help from the subway staff or ring me up directly. After you arrive, we will have various traditional activities, such as watching the Spring Festival Gala, making dumplings, and setting off firecrackers, all of which will drop you into a strong atmosphere of festival. In addition, there are also a series of interesting games we can play together for entertainment.

I am eager to see you and I hope you will enjoy the festival with my family.

Yours sincerely

LiHua

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達屬于書信體寫作，根據(jù)題目要求和提示信息把細致的安排在信中表達清楚。寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點。2、嚴格按照題目要求與提示信息，把主要內(nèi)容表達清楚；嚴格遵守書信體格式，稱呼，開頭，主體和結尾；本文寫作時應按時間順序。3、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。 4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點。

【亮點分析】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結構。I’m excited to hear that you will come to China to spend the Chinese New Year’s Eve. 是賓語從句；all of which will drop you into a strong atmosphere of festival. 是all of which引導的定語從句；使用了be excited to do sth，I am glad to tell you，have some troubles in doing，set off等短語，使文章更富有文采；還使用了After you arrive, In addition,等連詞和短語，使文章結構更有層次，也使語言更連貫。