Question

請(qǐng)你以“The Great Person I Admire”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，內(nèi)容包括：
1． 從下表中選擇對(duì)你影響最大的一位偉人并描述他（她）的主要事跡；
2． 談?wù)剛ト藢?duì)你產(chǎn)生的激勵(lì)作用。
注意：字?jǐn)?shù)100-120；標(biāo)題不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯：動(dòng)物學(xué)家zoologist  n. 黑猩猩 chimp  n. 雜交的 hybrid  adj.

Jane Goodall（1934-），Britain	LinQiaozhi(1901-1983), China	Yuan Longping(1930-), China
* 動(dòng)物學(xué)家* 前往非洲研究黑猩猩多年* 在研究和保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物方面做出巨大貢獻(xiàn)	* 婦科專家* 致力于婦科疾病的研究* 在婦產(chǎn)學(xué)科方面做出巨大貢獻(xiàn)	* 農(nóng)業(yè)專家* 致力于雜交水稻研究* 在消除世界饑餓方面做出巨大貢獻(xiàn)

 

Answer 1

Of the three great person, I would like to choose Yuan Longping, an agricultural pioneer of China. It is known that there exists hunger in many countries. To help more people to get enough food, Yuan Longping has devoted himself to improving the output of hybrid rice. Thanks to his research, the output has been doubled. More importantly,
Yuan Longping is willing to share his achievement with others, which contributes to ridding the world of hunger.
As for me, Yuan Longping is the greatest person in the world. It is his devotion that makes him successful and his devotion has inspired me a lot. Actually, I have some difficulty in learning English. However, where there is devotion, there is a way. I really believe that my devotion can make me expert in English.

試題分析：本文是一篇人物傳記類短文。本文選擇其中一位進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作，審題時(shí)注意在此類文章中通常使用過(guò)去時(shí)講述此人所做過(guò)的事情。本文的要點(diǎn)給出的并不是很多，考生一定要做是的的發(fā)揮，可以使用閱讀理解中的相應(yīng)句式來(lái)進(jìn)行填充，要使用高級(jí)句式，讓文章富有變化，更有可讀性。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：對(duì)于人物傳記類寫(xiě)作要注意時(shí)態(tài)，在寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候可以加上適當(dāng)?shù)南胂螅�做適當(dāng)?shù)臄U(kuò)充。連詞，高級(jí)詞匯，高級(jí)句型這寫(xiě)作三要素仍然不能缺少。