7.假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文.文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處.錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改.
增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(∧),并在其詞下面寫出該加的詞.
刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉.
修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線,并在其詞下面寫出修改后的詞.
注意:1.每句錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;
2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分.
Dear classmates,
As the college entrance exams are really around a corner now,many students feel much stressing.What should we do it to avoid this?
Firstly,doing physical exercise was the best way to reduce stress and help people relax.Therefore,it is helpful that we each does some regular physical exercise.Secondly,making a proper study plan is great importance too,since it is helpful for us to do our work more efficient.Last but not least,we should pay special attention in our diet as well.Anyway,a balanced diet can keep them smart and energetic.
Only if we can do these things will we make our times of study enjoyable,efficient and fruitful.

分析 本文介紹了幾個(gè)減少學(xué)習(xí)壓力的方法.首先是經(jīng)常鍛煉來放松;第二是制作有效的學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃來提高學(xué)習(xí)效率;最后要注意飲食平衡.

解答 Dear classmates,
As the college entrance exams are really around a corner now,many students feel much stressing.What should we do it to avoid this?
Firstly,doing physical exercise was the best way to reduce stress and help people relax.Therefore,it is helpful that we eachdoes some regular physical exercise.Secondly,making a proper study plan is∧great importance too,since it is helpful for us to do our work more efficient.Last but not least,we should pay special attentionin our diet as well.Anyway,a balanced diet can keep them smart and energetic.
Only if we can do these things will we make our times of study enjoyable,efficient and fruitful.
解析:
①a→the.考查冠詞.固定短語around the corner表示"即將來臨".   
②stressing→stressed.考查形容詞的辨析.做表語,修飾主語many students 用形容詞stressed,表示"有壓力的".  
③去掉it.考查代詞.句子What should we do it to avoid this?中疑問詞What做we do 的賓語,表示"我們應(yīng)該做的事",所以去掉it. 
④was→is.考查系動詞的形式.本句討論的是現(xiàn)在的事,所以系動詞用is.
⑤does→do.考查主謂一致關(guān)系.和主語 we一致,用do,each只是同位語,起強(qiáng)調(diào)作用. 
⑥great前加of.考查固定句式.固定句式of  great importance=important,表示"非常重要的". 
⑦efficient→efficiently.考查副詞的句法功能.修飾動詞短語do our work 用副詞efficiently.
⑧in→to.考查介詞.固定短語  pay  attention  to表示"注意到". 
⑨t(yī)hem→us.考查代詞一致.代指上句的主語we 用us.       
⑩times→time.考查名詞.本句里的time表示"時(shí)間",是不可數(shù)名詞,所以不用復(fù)數(shù).

點(diǎn)評 考查短文改錯(cuò).
短文改錯(cuò)時(shí)要注意一下幾點(diǎn):1.快速閱讀,整體把握短文大意.2.重視語境以及上下文的關(guān)系.3.充分運(yùn)用基礎(chǔ)語言知識找出錯(cuò)誤所在.

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