Question

下圖表為近幾年中美兩國電子商務發(fā)展比較及其將來幾年的發(fā)展趨勢。請根據圖表信息，以 “E-commerce, an ever-increasing trend in China”為題，為某英語報寫一篇稿子，內容須包括：
1、圖表主要信息（用30個左右英語單詞描述）；
2、中國電子商務增長的原因（經濟穩(wěn)步增長，人民收入提高，人口大于美國，網上購物方便）；
3、你的觀點（可從保護和規(guī)范電子商務市場談起）。
注意：
1、詞數150左右，開頭已經給出，但不計入詞數；
2、作文中不得提及你所在的學校及本人姓名。
3、參考詞匯：cybercrime網絡犯罪；phishing網絡釣魚

E-Commerce Sales and Growth 2008-2016 (China vs US)

E-commerce, an ever-increasing trend in China
    The chart shows China’s e-commerce sales started with only 20 billion USD in 2008, and
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Answer 1

One possible version：
E-commerce, an ever-increasing trend in China
The chart shows China’s e-commerce sales started with only 20 billion USD in 2008, and was about 60% of the US’s in 2011. However, it surpassed the US in 2013, and is expected to double that of the US in the near future.
There are several factors contributing to the rapid growth in e-commerce in China. Firstly, even though the world has experienced a serious economic decline, China has enjoyed a steady growth throughout, leading to people’s income increasing continuously. Secondly, China has a much larger population than the US, possessing the largest number of netizens in the world. Finally, people find it more convenient to shop online, and are more willing to purchase online than ever before.
The speedy e-commerce, I think, is just inevitable. What we should do is find effective ways to regulate the e-shopping market, improve the quality of e-service and prevent cybercrime like phishing, fraud and cheating, so as to enjoy a healthier and more prosperous e-commerce market in China.

試題分析：本篇書面表達是一篇圖表作文，這類題型具有文字少，信息少，要點分散等特征。我們在寫作時要領會圖表的全部信息，不要遺漏要點�；�本寫作模板為：首段要表明圖示信息，就本文來說就是要介紹中國電子商務從2008年到2013年逐年增長，而且還超過美國。第二段要得出結論并且分析原因；第三段提出自己的建議或看法。本文中列舉的原因較多，要注意使用表示層次或順序的連接詞，以使文章有層次感。此外，在寫作時盡量使用多種句式結構來提高文章的檔次。
【亮點說明】本文使用經典的三段式結構布局，第一段介紹了圖表提示的信息；第二段分析了造成這種狀況的幾點原因，包括經濟穩(wěn)步增長，人民收入提高，人口大于美國，網上購物方便等等，此段首句為主題句，然后用firstly、secondly、finally等有效的起到連接作用，使文章層次分明，條理清楚。在文章最后作者使用了一個涵蓋信息量大的長句提出自己的建議和看法，充分顯示了作者駕馭語言的能力。