Question

9．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
    增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
    刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）畫掉．
    修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
    注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
          2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
       I am always very interested in the traveling．My reasons are quite simply and clear．If someone is not satisfied with my opinion，I shall be greatly surprising at his way of thinking．On the one hand，traveling increase our knowledge of the world．Only by travel can we visit local places of interest，listen to the story about the places and have a taste of different local foods．On the other hand，traveling is very good to our health．While we are traveling，we can breathe fresh air or exercise our bodies as well．Usually，people are often traveling are in good health．In a word，I sincerely hope everybody will grasp as much opportunities as possible to travel．

Answer 1

分析 本文講述了作者喜歡旅游的原因．
我非常喜歡旅游．在旅游的過程中我們不僅可以了解世界，而且可以聽到當(dāng)?shù)氐墓适�，品嘗美食．我們可以呼吸到新鮮的空氣，鍛煉身體．總之希望每個(gè)人都能抓住盡可能多的機(jī)會(huì)去旅行．

解答 I am always very interested in the traveling．My reasons are quite simply and clear．If someone is not satisfied with my opinion，I shall be greatly surprising at his way of thinking．On the one hand，traveling increase our knowledge of the world．Only by travel can we visit local places of interest，listen to the story about the places and have a taste of different local foods．On the other hand，traveling is very good to our health．While we are traveling，we can breathe fresh air or exercise our bodies as well．Usually，people∧are often traveling are in good health．In a word，I sincerely hope everybody will grasp as much opportunities as possible to travel．
解析：
第一句：刪除the．考查冠詞．traveling在本句里是泛指旅游，所以刪除the．
第二句：simply→simple．考查形容詞和副詞．和形容詞 clear一起做表語用形容詞simple．
第三句：surprising→surprised．考查形容詞辨析．修飾主語I 用surprised表示"吃驚的"．
第四句：increase→increases．考查主謂一致關(guān)系．動(dòng)名詞traveling主語做主語時(shí)，謂語動(dòng)詞用第三人稱單數(shù)．
第五句：travel→traveling．考查非謂語動(dòng)詞．做介詞by的賓語用doing．
story→stories．考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)．本句表示"聽關(guān)于這個(gè)地方的故事"，所以故事肯定不止一個(gè)，因此用可數(shù)名詞story的復(fù)數(shù)．
第六句：to→for．考查介詞．表示"對…有好處"用 be good for．
第七句：or→and．考查連詞． breathe fresh air 和 exercise our bodies 是并列關(guān)系，所以用 and連接．
第八句：在people后添加who/that （注：刪除people后面的are在語法上亦可接受）．考查定語從句．定語從句are often traveling代指先行詞people，缺少主語，所以用who/that．
第九句：much→many．考查可數(shù)名詞的修飾詞．修飾可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)opportunities用many．

點(diǎn)評 考查短文改錯(cuò)．
下列情況應(yīng)免冠，代詞限定名詞前；
專有名詞不可數(shù)，學(xué)科球類三餐飯；
復(fù)數(shù)名詞表泛指，兩節(jié)星期月份前；
顏色語種和國名，稱呼習(xí)語及頭銜．