Question

1．假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌的以下作文．文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的 詞．
刪除：多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線(xiàn)，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
Every boy and every girl are eager for success．But what can we succeed in life？Here are my opinions：
First，we must be friendly and kindly．It allows us to make friends and survive wherever we are．Second，we must set the goal，which motivates us to pursue our dreams．Third，it's better to believe in us．Only with self-confidence we realize our goals．Fourth，we should develop good characters，such as a strong will and diligence，because good qualities help us to hold on to our dreams since we get into the trouble．
As far as I'm concerning，success belongs for those who keep on trying．So let's take action now!

Answer 1

分析 本文主要介紹了一些如何成功的建議．第一，我們必須友好和善良；第二，制定一個(gè)目標(biāo)；第三，要相信我們自己；第四，養(yǎng)成一些好的性格．作者堅(jiān)信：成功屬于那些總是在努力的人．

解答 Every boy and every girl are eager for success．But what can we succeed in life？Here are my opinions：
First，we must be friendly andkindly．It allows us to make friends and survive wherever we are．Second，we must set the goal，which motivates us to pursue our dreams．Third，it's better to believe in us．Only with self-confidence∧we realize our goals．Fourth，we should develop good characters，such as a strong will and diligence，because good qualities help us to hold on to our dreams since we get into the trouble．
As far as I'm concerning，success belongs for those who keep on trying．So let's take action now!
詳解：
1．a(chǎn)re改為is 考查主謂一致．"every+單數(shù)名詞+and+every+單數(shù)名詞"作主語(yǔ)時(shí)謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)．
2．what改為how 考查副詞．succeed是不及物動(dòng)詞，此處how為副詞，在句中作狀語(yǔ)．
3．kindly改為kind 考查形容詞．kind為形容詞，與形容詞friendly并列，作be動(dòng)詞的表語(yǔ)．
4．the改為a 考查冠詞．goal是可數(shù)名詞，單數(shù)形式前加不定冠詞a表示泛指．
5．us改為ourselves 考查代詞．根據(jù)句意：它能激勵(lì)我們自己去追求我們的夢(mèng)想．此處應(yīng)用反身代詞ourselves作賓語(yǔ)．
6．加can 考查倒裝句．only修飾介詞短語(yǔ)with self-confidence放在句首，后面的句子應(yīng)用部分倒裝，由句意可知應(yīng)加情態(tài)動(dòng)詞can．
7．since改為when/if 考查連詞．根據(jù)句意：如果我們有麻煩．此處when/if引導(dǎo)時(shí)間/條件狀語(yǔ)從句．
8．去掉the 考查冠詞．get into trouble意為"有麻煩"，是固定搭配．
9．concerning改為concerned 考查固定搭配．a(chǎn)s far as I'm concerned意為"就我而言"，是固定短語(yǔ)．
10．for改為to 考查介詞．belong to意為"屬于"，是固定搭配．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 高考短文改錯(cuò)題的形式有說(shuō)明文，短文故事，書(shū)信等，具有很強(qiáng)的實(shí)用性．短文的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言都符合高中學(xué)生的實(shí)際，從表面上看類(lèi)似一篇學(xué)生習(xí)作．首先，通讀全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱(chēng)及行文邏輯，在通讀全文時(shí)把一些容易的錯(cuò)誤先改好，再進(jìn)行逐句改錯(cuò)．其次，要進(jìn)行逐個(gè)句子的改錯(cuò)．這是要對(duì)文中的詞法、句法和語(yǔ)篇著重分析和特別注意．最后把改好的短文再閱讀一遍，檢查答案是否正確，感覺(jué)是否還有不妥之處，最終形成定稿．