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18．假定你住在一個(gè)涉外小區(qū)．社區(qū)委員會(huì)請(qǐng)你幫忙用英文以短文的形式寫一封電子郵件，將周末農(nóng)家采摘活動(dòng)的安排傳達(dá)給住戶．要點(diǎn)：
時(shí)間：下周六上午 8：00 至 11：00；
內(nèi)容：采摘蘋果；
報(bào)名：辦公室，下周四下午 5：00 前；
提示：帶帽子，手套．
注意：1．詞數(shù) 100 左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：社區(qū)community
Dear neighbors，
                                                                  
We are looking forward to your joining us in this activity．
Community Office．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
 We will meet at 8：00 am at the gate，where a blue bus will be watiting．
高分句型二：
We suggest that you bring with you a hat and a pair of gloves
句型一  where a blue bus will be watiting．該句是一個(gè)由where引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，where在句中作地點(diǎn)狀語(yǔ)，先行詞為gate
句型二  that you bring with you a hat and a pair of gloves 該句是一個(gè)由that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句，該賓語(yǔ)從句為于suggest之后，suggest后面的賓語(yǔ)從句要使用虛擬語(yǔ)氣，該虛擬語(yǔ)氣的使用應(yīng)：suggest that sb （should） do sth，should 可以省略

解答 Dear neighbors，
    We are happy to announce that our community is going to organize an activity for all the communitymembers．Next Saturday，we are going to pick apples in a village 20 kilometers away from our town，and all are welcome．We will meet at 8：00 am at the gate，where a blue bus will be watiting．（高分句型一）Our outdoor activity will last 3 hours，and we'll be back at about 11 o'clock．（說(shuō)明活動(dòng)情況）
   If you are interested，please sign up at the office before 5：00pm next Thursday so that we will make necessary arrangements．We suggest that you bring with you a hat and a pair of gloves．（高分句型二）
   We are looking forward to your joining us in this activity．（提出邀請(qǐng)）
                                                                                                                      Community Office

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