Question

10．假定你是李華，你校成立了青年志愿者協(xié)會，你想報名參加，于是向協(xié)會提出申請，陳述你
加人這個組織的理由．文章開頭已為你寫好．理由包括：
1．在現(xiàn)代社會里幫助別人是禮貌行為，且我們處于困境時也需要他人幫助；
2．通過幫助別人，自己獲得體驗，增強(qiáng)信心；
3．志愿者活動使生活更有意義，使世界更美好．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Sir or Madam，
I would like to be a volunteer in my spare time．
                                                    
Yours                                                                               
 Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
We need others'help in case we get into trouble
高分句型二：
What's more，volunteering makes us feel better about ourselves，thus making our life more meaningful．
句型一  in case we get into trouble 該句是一個由in case引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句
句型二  ①volunteering makes us feel better about ourselves 該句主語是由動名詞充當(dāng)，動名詞作主語，謂語應(yīng)該用單數(shù)
            ②making our life more meaningful此處試用了現(xiàn)在分詞作結(jié)果狀語
此外該文章還有以下高級詞匯和重要短語：first of all 首先   what's more 而且  in a word 總之

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
    I would like to be a volunteer in my spare time．My reasons are follows：
    First of all，it is good manners to help others，espaecially in modern society．We need others'help in case we get into trouble．（高分句型一）
    Second，we are able to improve ourselves by helping others because we can gain valuable experience and build up our confidence while serving others．What's more，volunteering makes us feel better about ourselves，thus making our life more meaningful．（高分句型二）More importantly，we can make the world a better place to live in by volunteering．（活動介紹）
In a word，volunteering can make a difference to our life，and i think it is very rewarding to be a volunteer．（活動意義）
                Yours
                 Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 該書面表達(dá)為提綱類，該類作文一般規(guī)定了考生的寫作思路，羅列出了相應(yīng)的寫作要點(diǎn)．考生在平時應(yīng)注意積累相應(yīng)的詞匯和短語，在寫作時盡量做到將要點(diǎn)與主題緊密結(jié)合，用準(zhǔn)確的、簡潔明了的語言將作文展示出來．