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現(xiàn)在，越來越多的大陸游客可以赴臺旅游，而日月潭作為臺灣的主要景點，很多人并不真正了解，請按照以下要點提示，寫一篇介紹日月潭（Sun Moon Lake）的英語短文,不少于110詞。
1. 日月潭位于臺灣的南投縣，是臺灣最著名的風景區(qū)，也是臺灣最大的天然湖泊。
2. 湖中央有一島嶼把湖分成兩部分，湖的東北部分圓圓的像太陽，而湖的西南部分彎彎的像月牙，故為日月潭。
3. 日月潭處在山地與西部平原之間，受3000萬年前喜馬拉雅（the Himalayas）造山運動的影響，由玉山（Mt.Yu）和阿里山（Mt.A-li）之間的斷裂（ruptured）盆地積水而成。             

Answer 1

Sample：                   Sun Moon Lake
Sun Moon Lake, located in Nantou County, Taiwan Province, is the largest natural lake as well as the most well-known scenic spot in Taiwan.
Do you know how its name came into being? In the middle of the lake is an island, which divides the lake into two parts. The northeastern part of the lake is round like the sun, while the southwestern part is shaped like the moon. So it is called “Sun Moon Lake”.
Between the mountainous region and the western plain lies Sun Moon Lake, which was greatly affected by the mountain-making movement of the Himalayas 30 million years ago. Besides, the constant water caused by the ruptured basins between Mt. A-li and Mt. Yu, created the present Sun Moon Lake.
It is such a wonderful place. Why not try a visit?

試題分析：本文是關于臺灣的旅游景點，屬于提綱類作文，要求考生的要點要寫全，不能有遺漏，在寫作的時候用適當?shù)倪B接詞把句子串聯(lián)起來，在選擇詞匯和詞組的時候要選用高級的詞匯和詞組，以提升文章的整體層次，最重要的是要選用3-5個高級句型，如倒裝句或者強調句等，讓文章的句式充滿變化。
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