Question

總所周知，每個(gè)人都希望能保持一份好心情，因?yàn)楹眯那閷ξ覀兊膶W(xué)習(xí)工作都非常重要。因此，如何保持一份好心情也是大家關(guān)心的話題。根據(jù)下面的提示和要求寫一篇英文演講稿，就如何保持好心情談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?br />Why should we keep a good mood?
improve our life quality(質(zhì)量)
be good for our health
……
How to keep a good mood?
keep a good sense of humour
be friendly,share joys with others
……
注意：（1）短文必須包括上述全部要點(diǎn)，應(yīng)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
（2）詞數(shù)：100 左右。短文開頭已給出（不計(jì)字?jǐn)?shù)）。
Good morning, everyone!
The topic of my speech today is” How to keep a good mood”.

Answer 1

Good morning, everone!
The topic of my speech today is “How to keep a good mood”.
As we all know, a good mood is very important for our work and life. It can help promote our work efforts, and improve our life quality. Besides, if we are in a good mood, we will have fewer illnesses and worries. In this way, we can stay healthy and live longer.
To keep a good mood, we should maintain a good sense of humour. Second, we should take up some hobbies, which will widen our horizons and add pleasure to our daily life.Third, it is very important for us to be friendly, communicate openly, and share our interests and pleasures with others as much as possible. Finally, we should keep calm and try to overcome our difficulties when facing them and try to make progress in our work.
In a word, if we follow the above suggestions, I am sure we will have a good state of mind all the time.

試題分析：本題是一篇演講稿，基本大意都已給出，難度不大，但是做題時(shí)最好遵循一定的步驟，方可得一個(gè)不錯(cuò)的分?jǐn)?shù)。
點(diǎn)評：要寫好一篇演講類的文章，要遵循一定原則和步驟，如下：
㈠審題：體裁應(yīng)為演講稿，時(shí)態(tài)為現(xiàn)在時(shí)，第一人稱。
㈡列出要點(diǎn)：根據(jù)提示可以列出：
好心情對我們的學(xué)習(xí)工作都非常重要。
如何保持一份好心情。
希望或愿望。
㈢拓展：1. Why should we keep a good mood?
2. How to keep a good mood?
㈣潤色：1.高級詞匯 2.句式變換 3.特殊句式
㈤關(guān)聯(lián)詞：根據(jù)上下文邏輯的需要，適當(dāng)加上關(guān)聯(lián)詞。
㈥核對有無簡單錯(cuò)誤：1.冠詞a/an 2. 第三人稱單數(shù) 3. 時(shí)態(tài)混亂 4.拼寫錯(cuò)誤
㈦謄寫：注意卷面整潔，無勾畫。