Question

14．In a small village，the parents of a little boy were very depressed due to his bad temper（脾氣）．The boy used to get angry very easily and hurt others with his words．While he forgot what he spoke in anger，his friends and neighbours avoided him．
His mother and father tried many ways to make him give up his anger and develop kindness．Unfortunately，all their attempts failed．Finally，the boy's father came up with an idea．
One day，his father gave him a huge bag of nails，asking him to hammer one nail to the fence every time he lost his temper．The little boy found it funny and accepted what his father had said．
His anger drove him to hammer 30 nails into the fence on the first day!Over the next few days，the little boy found it very difficult to hammer the nails into the fence and decided to control his temper．
Gradually，the number of nails hammered into the fence was reduced and the day arrived when he hammered none!
Now，his father told him to remove the nails every day as he had controlled his anger．Several days passed and the boy was able to pull out most of the nails from the fence．
The father appreciated him and asked him，pointing to one of the holes，"What do you see there？"
The boy replied，"A hole in the fence？"
He told the boy，"The nails were your bad temper and they were hammered into people．You ca n remove the nails but still see the holes in the fence．The fence never looks the same!It has scars all over!Your bad temper and anger were like that!Use words for good．Use them to show your heart!"
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Answer 1

分析 文章概要，在寫完了要點(diǎn)之后，下一步的工作就是要把這些要點(diǎn)用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞進(jìn)行連接，使上下句之間具有連貫性．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】
文章對(duì)原文要點(diǎn)的理解和呈現(xiàn)情況比較好，按照故事發(fā)展的順序展開，用幾個(gè)簡(jiǎn)潔的句子把文章內(nèi)容表述的非常清晰完整．文章使用了很好的短語和句子給文章增色bad-tempered脾氣壞的；To help him give up his anger為了幫助他克服壞脾氣（不定式作狀語）；whenever he became angry無論何時(shí)他感到生氣時(shí)．
高分句型一：
To help him give up his anger，his father asked him to hammer a nail into a fence whenever he became angry and remove one whenever he didn't lose his temper．
為了幫助他放棄他的易怒脾氣，他的父親讓他把釘子釘進(jìn)籬笆在他很生氣的時(shí)候，可以拔掉一個(gè)只要他不發(fā)脾氣．
高分句型二：
This story tells us just like holes in a fence，a bad temper and anger can hurt other forever．
這個(gè)故事告訴我們，就像在一個(gè)柵欄上穿孔，壞脾氣和憤怒會(huì)傷害其他的永遠(yuǎn)．

解答 There was a little bad-tempered boy in a small village．To help him give up his anger，his father asked him to hammer a nail into a fence whenever he became angry and remove one whenever he didn't lose his temper（高分句型一）．Gradually，the boy could control his temper．This story tells us just like holes in a fence，a bad temper and anger can hurt other forever（高分句型二）．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 概要寫作的基礎(chǔ)是理解語篇，而讀懂語篇的基礎(chǔ)是詞匯，尤其是對(duì)關(guān)鍵詞匯的掌握與運(yùn)用．在此基礎(chǔ)上，綜合運(yùn)用語法與句法結(jié)構(gòu)，按照行文邏輯組織語言，形成概要．