分析 本文是一篇演講稿,開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出,所以只注意組織好篇章結(jié)構(gòu)和要點(diǎn)的表述即可.其中要點(diǎn)包括◆戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)產(chǎn)生的原因(人們的仇恨、失去理智等);◆戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)帶來(lái)的危害(人們失去生命、經(jīng)濟(jì)倒退、環(huán)境污染等);◆呼吁世界停止戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng),保持和 平..在寫(xiě)演講稿時(shí)要首先提出論點(diǎn),然后進(jìn)行論證.注意語(yǔ)言要有說(shuō)服力,盡量多使用祈使句,而且語(yǔ)言要簡(jiǎn)練,不啰嗦.本文應(yīng)該使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),而且用第一人稱.
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)要點(diǎn)全面,結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語(yǔ)言風(fēng)格符合演講稿類的文體要求,是一篇較好的范文.在文中作者使用了Meanwhile,so等短語(yǔ)和連接詞,使文章語(yǔ)言自然流暢,內(nèi)容過(guò)渡自然.還使用了定語(yǔ)從句When we are reading a novel describing the war,no matter if it is the First or the Second World War,we can imagine the bitterness,sadness and hopelessness that the war brought us.祈使句Let's work harder to get rid of any kind of fights and conflicts.Wish that the different nations unite together,no matter what colour they are and what religions they believe in.等多種句式結(jié)構(gòu),增加了文章的可讀性.
解答 Good afternoon,everyone!
The topic of my speech today is"Stop War and Keep Peace".
Now,most of the people around the world are enjoying the peace which everybody longs for.(高分句型一)When we are reading a novel describing the war,no matter if it is the First or the Second World War,we can imagine the bitterness,sadness and hopelessness that the war brought us.(高分句型二)There are many reasons accounting for the war,for example,the hostility between different races and madness of some people.(戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)產(chǎn)生的原因)
War is very terrible.Everybody hears it with fear.In a war thousands and thousands of lives will be lost and a large amount of money will be wasted.It brings us untold miseries and damage.(戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)帶來(lái)的危害)So that is why most people are striving for a much more beautiful and peaceful world,although they are not famous ones.(高分句型三)Meanwhile,people will regret that there are still some regional wars and confrontations in different places of the world.There are still hurt,tears,and deaths on the same earth with us.Let's work harder to get rid of any kind of fights and conflicts.Wish that the different nations unite together,no matter what colour they are and what religions they believe in.(高分句型四)(呼吁世界停止戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng),保持和平)
Thank you for your listening!
點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力.在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致,時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子;二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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