Question

5．2012年CCTV播入的紀錄片《舌尖上的中國》（A Bite of China）紅遍大江南北．掠過的鏡頭向我們展現(xiàn)了如此誘人又如此熟悉的家鄉(xiāng)味道．請根據(jù)以下提示，并結合事例，用英語寫一篇短文．
"No matter how far you go，no matter who you become，you will still have a taste for the food you grew up with．"
注意：1．可照抄英語提示語，但不計入總詞數(shù)；
2．除詩歌外，文體不限；
3．文中不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱；
4．字數(shù)為120左右．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇開放式作文，寫作時不僅僅對要點進行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內容，使文章看起來更充實，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文．需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可．寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題．
亮點句型一：My grandma would tell us all those amazing ancient stories while making sticky rice cakes in the shape of lovely animals for us．
奶奶會給我們講那些神奇的古代故事，而我們卻以可愛的動物的形狀做糯米糕．這是一個省略句，while從句中省略了主語my grandma，和謂語動詞中的be動詞．
亮點句型二：My uncle，who works at a local restaurant featuring fish specialties，would bring back some of his best dishes back home to share with the family．我的叔叔在當?shù)匾患矣恤~類特色的餐館工作，他會帶回一些他最好的菜回家和家人分享．本句是一個被限制性定語從句，who指代先行詞my uncle．

解答 Recently，the TV program A Bite of China has attracted much attention．Its celebration of the diversity of delicious local food around China reminds me of the food in my hometown．
     Many people complain that life changes too fast．But I believe that there is one thing that never escapes us，the taste for the food we grew up with．I grew up in a family of three generations under one roof．Living together with dozens of your relatives proved to be great fun．My grandma would tell us all those amazing ancient stories while making sticky rice cakes in the shape of lovely animals for us．（亮點句型一）My uncle，who works at a local restaurant featuring fish specialties，would bring back some of his best dishes back home to share with the family．（亮點句型二）I have traveled to other places in China，but never have I tasted better fish than my uncle's．
      In my opinion，A Bite of China is about more than merely food．The program tells people about the real China．As a nation of food lovers，we are drawn to the series by the impressive-looking food，but we are even more impressed by the human interests in it-the love of the food，of our hometowns and of our mother country．

點評 考查開放性作文寫作，開放性作文給出了一個話題，并有部分的文字提示．給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大．對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力．在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭．同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，在發(fā)表個人觀點的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性．