Question

在高中即將畢業(yè)之際，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)準(zhǔn)備一篇“國(guó)旗下講話(huà)”的演講稿。
內(nèi)容要求：
1. 高中三年的收獲和遺憾；
2. 展望大學(xué)生活所面臨的挑戰(zhàn)；
3．對(duì)高一，高二學(xué)生的建議。
注意：
1. 可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)、連貫；
2. 開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息；
4. 詞數(shù)120左右。
Dear schoolmates,
Good morning!
As I am graduating, I’d like to ____________________________________________
Good luck to all of you!
Yours
Li Hua

Answer 1

As I am graduating, I’d like to look back on my unforgettable years here.
In the past three years, I’ve benefited a lot from my school education, which helps me grow into an independent thinker and an efficient learner, as well as preparing for the future.
However, during this period, I was too concerned about my academic performance to get actively involved in the extra-curriculum activities. That left me a little regretful and will always remind me to better myself in an all-round way.
Looking ahead, I think the biggest challenge in my college life will be adapting to a life away from my parents and taking care of myself. But I’m full of confidence that I’ll get used to it soon and move on.
I also want to make some suggestions to you, Senior 1 and 2 students. Time and tide wait for no man. We teenagers should make the most of our valuable time at high school and realize our full potential.
Good luck to all of you!
Yours
Li Hua

試題分析：本文是一封演講稿。話(huà)題是要求用英語(yǔ)準(zhǔn)備一篇“國(guó)旗下講話(huà)”的演講稿。具有很強(qiáng)的可寫(xiě)性，內(nèi)容貼近考生的實(shí)際情況，考生有話(huà)可說(shuō)，有話(huà)可寫(xiě)。文章的要點(diǎn)也基本上都給出來(lái)了，但只是一個(gè)提綱，考生還需要做適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中要注意使用合適的連接詞，同時(shí)也要注意使用一些高級(jí)的句型如強(qiáng)調(diào)句，倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次。本更有文采。同時(shí)在列舉措施的時(shí)候要使用合適的連接詞如：for one thing，What’s more等，讓文章看起來(lái)很有條理，也很流暢。本篇文章在寫(xiě)作時(shí)不要啰嗦，力求簡(jiǎn)潔的表達(dá)自己的觀(guān)點(diǎn)。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】In the past three years, I’ve benefited a lot from my school education, which helps me grow into an independent thinker and an efficient learner, as well as preparing for the future.這句話(huà)用了非限制性定語(yǔ)從句和as well as這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞，I was too concerned about my academic performance to get actively involved in the extra-curriculum activities.這句話(huà)用的是too…to…結(jié)構(gòu)，和get involved in詞組，Looking ahead, I think the biggest challenge in my college life will be adapting to a life away from my parents and taking care of myself.這句話(huà)使用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞做狀語(yǔ)和adapt to這個(gè)詞組。