【題目】假如你是育才中學(xué)的李津,即將高中畢業(yè)。你打算報(bào)考香港大學(xué),學(xué)習(xí)環(huán)境科學(xué)(Environmental Science),但有一些事情不太清楚,因此給該校寫一封電子郵件,咨詢?nèi)缦孪嚓P(guān)事宜:

1.如何才能被該校的相關(guān)專業(yè)錄。

2.是否需要參加專門的英語(yǔ)考試?

3.該校的獎(jiǎng)金,學(xué)費(fèi),食宿安排和生活費(fèi)用等情況。

注意:1.郵件必須包括以上內(nèi)容,可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié);

2.詞數(shù):不少于100。

Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m Li Jin, a senior student from Yucai High School and soon I will graduate.

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Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Jin

【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m Li Jin, a senior student from Yucai High School and soon I will graduate. I plan to apply to your university. So I’m writing to consult you for some information about getting admitted into Hong Kong University.

I am very interested in Environment Science, a famous major in your university. Because of the popularity of environmental protection, I plan to choose it as my major hoping to make contributions in this field. I wonder how I can be a student in your university and whether I need to take some special language tests. How can I apply for the scholarship and how much will I have to pay for my education and accommodations? What about the living costs?

Your timely reply would be much appreciated.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Jin

【解析】這是一篇應(yīng)用類作文。文章內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出。同學(xué)們?cè)趯戇@篇文章時(shí),要注意以下幾點(diǎn):1. 通篇以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主。2. 要點(diǎn)要齊全。如何被學(xué)校的相關(guān)專業(yè)錄取,是否參加英語(yǔ)考試,食宿等問(wèn)題一個(gè)都不能缺。但是不要對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)單的羅列。可以使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞,使上下文行文流暢,銜接自然流程。3. 注意語(yǔ)氣。既然是書(shū)信,所以要注意格式和注意禮貌用語(yǔ)。該文寫作的難點(diǎn)主要是如何更好的敘述這三點(diǎn)。因?yàn)樗锌忌拇笾聝?nèi)容都是一樣的所以主要是看能不能寫出讓考官眼前一亮 的作文。同時(shí)要使文章的內(nèi)容充實(shí),不能顯得無(wú)力。學(xué)生可以采用簡(jiǎn)單句和復(fù)雜句結(jié)合的方法,并且同時(shí)穿插一些祈使句和倒裝句使文章充實(shí)。

【范文亮點(diǎn)】

本文書(shū)信格式正確,開(kāi)篇先簡(jiǎn)單明了的介紹了自己,然后開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山的表達(dá)了自己的目的,詢問(wèn)關(guān)于該校的錄取問(wèn)題,從學(xué)校的環(huán)境到學(xué)費(fèi)問(wèn)題,最后還不忘表達(dá)自己的感謝之情。文章內(nèi)容詳實(shí),該有的要點(diǎn)很好的表達(dá)了,而且敘述的時(shí)候注意了邏輯連詞的用法,是上下文銜接自然,準(zhǔn)確明了。

高級(jí)詞匯和短語(yǔ)的運(yùn)用:apply to向……申請(qǐng);consult sb for sth向某人咨詢某事;get admitted to獲準(zhǔn)許進(jìn)入;make contributions做出貢獻(xiàn)。等等。

全文句式多變,避免了句式單一。在敘述問(wèn)題和目的時(shí)整散結(jié)合,運(yùn)用賓語(yǔ)從句等,全文要點(diǎn)明確,邏輯清晰,行文銜接流暢。

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