Question

下面的餅狀圖（pie chat）顯示了你對(duì)你校學(xué)生興趣愛(ài)好的調(diào)查結(jié)果。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給English Weekly寫一篇短文，報(bào)道你的調(diào)查結(jié)果，并對(duì)此結(jié)果發(fā)表你的看法或建議。字?jǐn)?shù)120詞左右。首句已給出（不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）。

A recent survey shows what the students of our school like to do in their spare time.                         
                                                       
                                                                           

Answer 1

A recent survey shows what the students of our school like to do in their spare time. From the pie chat, we can see 53% of the students like sports, so doing sportsis the most popular activity in our school. The second popular activity for students issurfing the Internet and 36 % of the students have interest in it. Only a few students, about 8 percent of them, take reading as a hobby. And even fewer are fond of playing musical instruments.
In my point of view, our school should have more sports facilities built to satisfy the need of the students. Guidance should be given to students on surfing the Internet and ways must be found to arouse students’ interests in reading and music.

解析試題分析：看圖作文要求考生將畫面所包含的有效信息直接運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)思維轉(zhuǎn)換成英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言文字，再根據(jù)這些要點(diǎn)謀篇布局。要求考生把看到的圖表用文字表達(dá)出來(lái)，除了能表達(dá)清楚圖表中的信息外，考生還需要根據(jù)詞數(shù)要求，適當(dāng)拓展并發(fā)揮想象，從而使文章的敘述不單調(diào)。本文是對(duì)學(xué)生的興趣愛(ài)好的調(diào)查，是一篇議論文，應(yīng)該使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)的時(shí)態(tài)，使用第三人稱。要特別注意百分?jǐn)?shù)的表達(dá)方法，可以直接使用數(shù)字來(lái)表達(dá)。如53% of the students，也可以轉(zhuǎn)換成英語(yǔ)表達(dá)。在方便個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以建議父母親或者老師對(duì)于學(xué)生如何度過(guò)自己的業(yè)余時(shí)間給出一些建議和指導(dǎo)。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文中的運(yùn)用了一些高級(jí)的句式，如so doing sportsis the most popular activity in our school中使用了動(dòng)名詞在句中做主語(yǔ)，表示經(jīng)常性習(xí)慣性的行為。The second popular activity for students issurfing the Internet中也使用了動(dòng)名詞做表語(yǔ)的結(jié)構(gòu)。
考點(diǎn)：考察圖表類短文寫作