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閱讀下面一則新聞和一副圖片
家人朋友同事聚會(huì)吃飯，以前其樂融融一起天南海北地扯，現(xiàn)在隨著智能手機(jī)的流行，出現(xiàn)了一種“怪現(xiàn)象”：一桌子人一起吃飯，大家少有交談，都圍著餐桌玩起了手機(jī)。這樣的現(xiàn)象你身邊有嗎？
《廣州日?qǐng)?bào)》就“飯局聚會(huì)大家都在玩手機(jī)，你怎么看?”進(jìn)行了讀者調(diào)查，調(diào)查結(jié)果顯示，很多讀者表示對(duì)此現(xiàn)象無(wú)法忍受，他們認(rèn)為“飯局是大家面對(duì)面的社交場(chǎng)合，每個(gè)人都玩手機(jī)，和對(duì)著虛擬世界沒什么兩樣”;而認(rèn)為能夠忍受的人則覺得，玩手機(jī)確實(shí)能緩解壓力和與人交往帶來(lái)的不適。

請(qǐng)根據(jù)此新聞和圖片寫一篇不少于120詞的文章，內(nèi)容包括：
簡(jiǎn)要描述圖片和新聞中的社會(huì)現(xiàn)象；2. 分析產(chǎn)生此現(xiàn)象的原因 3談?wù)勀愕?u>看法和建議
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Nowadays, with the increasing popularity of smart phones (智能手機(jī)), …

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Nowadays, with the increasing popularity of smart phones (智能手機(jī)), it is not unusual to find a group of people sitting around the table, each playing with their smart phones separately instead of talking with each other face to face. As is vividly shown in the picture, the old lady is serving the table disappointedly, with all the other family members absorbed in their electronic products.
There are several reasons accounting for this phenomenon. Some people may lack the ability to communicate with others or the common interest while others claim that it’s a good way to relieve stress and embarrassment in social communications. Naturally, there are still others who are heavy smart phone users and fail to break away from the addiction.
As far as I’m concerned, it is essential for us to build closer social bonds through face-to-face conversations when getting together with our relatives, friends, classmates and colleagues. I strongly recommend that you put away your smart phones in such occasions not only to show respect for others but also to enjoy the gatherings and improve your communicative skills as well.

解析試題分析：這是一篇看圖作文，反映了因?yàn)橹悄苁謾C(jī)的流行，人們忽視了現(xiàn)實(shí)社會(huì)的人與人交流的問(wèn)題，寫作時(shí)要認(rèn)真讀圖，不要僅僅對(duì)圖畫進(jìn)行描述，也要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來(lái)更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇范文最大的特點(diǎn)是使用了詞組和多變的句式，適當(dāng)使用了高中的語(yǔ)法知識(shí)：account for“解釋，是…的原因”， As far as I’m concerned,“據(jù)我所知”， it is not unusual to find a group of people sitting around the table, each playing with their smart phones separately instead of talking with each other face to face. 這句話用了現(xiàn)在分詞和獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)，As is vividly shown in the picture, the old lady is serving the table disappointedly, with all the other family members absorbed in their electronic products.這句話用了非限制性定語(yǔ)從句和with符合結(jié)構(gòu)， Some people may lack the ability to communicate with others or the common interest while others claim that it’s a good way to relieve stress and embarrassment in social communications. 這句話用了while表示對(duì)比，和it做形式主語(yǔ)，Naturally, there are still others who are heavy smart phone users and fail to break away from the addiction.這句話用了定語(yǔ)從句， it is essential for us to build closer social bonds through face-to-face conversations when getting together with our relatives, friends, classmates and colleagues. 這句話用了狀語(yǔ)從句的省略句，I strongly recommend that you put away your smart phones in such occasions not only to show respect for others but also to enjoy the gatherings and improve your communicative skills as well.這句話用了not only…but also結(jié)構(gòu)。
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