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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同學(xué)們交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處。錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改:在錯的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意:1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。

“Your future depends on many things, but most on you.Yes, I can't agree more to this view.It's true that our future determined by many things, such as opportunities and help from others, but their own attitude, determination, and hard work play a more important role.In other words, we are the masters of our own future.

Take Abraham Lincoln for an example.He was born in a poor family, which only received a limited education in his childhood.Yet through his painstaking efforts, he then changes not only his own fate but also the history of America.Even to this day, Lincoln is regarded as one of the most inspired figures in the world.

However, I firmly believe that our future is in our own hand.

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【解析】

本文是一篇夾敘夾議的文章。文章以Abraham Lincoln為例，說明我們的未來是掌握在自己手中的。

1.考查副詞。修飾介詞短語on you，用副詞mostly，意為：大多數(shù)地，大部分地。故most改為mostly。

2.考查固定短語。句意：這個觀點我再同意不過了。agree to后接建議、計劃等，如suggestion, advice, plan；agree with表示同意某人或某人的意見、觀點等，agree on在……上達成一致。故to改為with或on。

3.考查時態(tài)和語態(tài)。句意：我們的未來是由很多事情決定的。主語our future與謂語動詞determine之間為被動關(guān)系，應(yīng)用被動語態(tài)，全文是一般現(xiàn)在時。故determined前加is。

4.考查代詞。根據(jù)上一句的our future 和下一句的we可知，應(yīng)該是our own attitude, determination…故their改為our。

5.考查固定短語。固定短語take…for example, 意為：以……為例。故去掉an 。

6.考查定語從句。which received a limited education in his childhood是非限定性定語從句，先行詞是He，指人，應(yīng)用who引導(dǎo)定語從句。故which改為who。

7.考查時態(tài)。句意：通過他艱苦的努力，他不僅改變了自己的命運，也改變了美國的歷史。這一段敘述的是Abraham Lincoln的故事, 根據(jù)前一句的一般過去時可知，這里應(yīng)用一般過去時。故changes改為changed。

8.考查形容詞。句意：即使到今天，林肯仍然被認為是世界上最勵志的人物之一。inspired意為：受到鼓勵的，inspiring意為：激勵人的。故inspired改為inspiring。

9.考查副詞。however 意為：然而，表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，此處是表示因果關(guān)系，應(yīng)使用therefore或thus。故however改為Therefore或Thus。

10.考查名詞。根據(jù)前面的代詞our own, 可知hand應(yīng)該用復(fù)數(shù)形式。故hand改為hands 。