Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你的美國朋友Mike在中國做交流生，你校將舉行中華文化節(jié)（Chinese Culture Festival），現(xiàn)請你給他寫封郵件介紹此次活動，內(nèi)容包括：

1. 目的（弘揚中國文化）；

2. 形式（古典文學(xué)賞析講座、詩詞朗誦比賽、書法展覽等）；

3. 邀請參加。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文流暢。

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Dear Mike,

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Yours faithfully

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mike,

How is everything going? As I know, as an exchange student you are quite interested in the Chinese traditional culture, so I’m writing to tell you about the Chinese Culture Festival to be held in our school next week.

The activity is aimed at carrying forward the Chinese traditional culture and encouraging students to know more about it, in which reading poems, lectures about classical Chinese culture and an exhibition of paintings and calligraphy are included. I definitely believe you’ll like it.

I sincerely invite you to take part in it and I hope it will be beneficial to your learning here.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封信。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇為一封書信；你的美國朋友Mike在中國做交流生，你校將舉行中華文化節(jié)（Chinese Culture Festival），現(xiàn)請你給他寫封郵件介紹此次活動的內(nèi)容并邀請他參加，時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時為主。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：中華文化節(jié)（Chinese Culture Festival），carry forward the Chinese traditional culture（弘揚中國文化），lectures about classical Chinese culture（古典文學(xué)賞析講座），an exhibition of paintings and calligraphy（書法展覽）等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。

本文內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)，使用了較多高級詞匯，如is aimed at；carry forward the Chinese traditional culture；定語從句的運用in which reading poems, lectures about classical Chinese culture and an exhibition of paintings and calligraphy are included.全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。