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家長生活上的照顧
學校提供了方便（延長圖書館和教室的開放時間…）
老師學習上給予的幫助（鼓勵，答疑解難…）
你自己感受和打算，至少兩點
注意：
1．必須包括主要內容，可以適當增減細節(jié)，使內容連貫、完整；
2．詞數(shù)：120詞左右；
3．開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)內．
I'm a senior 3student．The college entrance exam is on the wayI'm a senior 3 student．The college entrance exam is on the wayand everyone around us is trying their best to help us in different ways．At school，all the teachers work very hard，encouraging us to build up our confidence and inspiring us to improve our study．（高分句型）Whenever we meet with difficulties，they are ready to come to our help．（高分句型）Meanwhile，our school also provides good facilities for us students，for example the library stays open in the evenings and even on the weekends．At home，our parents take good care of us and make sure we are well fed so that we can always be full of energy．（高分句型）
I'm very grateful for the efforts of our parents and teachers．I'm determined to try my best to prepare for the exam．I am sure that with their encouragement and timely help I'll be able to achieve my goal and be a useful person of our society in the near future．（高分句型）．

分析 文章題材和體裁已經給出，無需考生過多考慮．而考生重點要注意審題，只有做好了審題環(huán)節(jié)才能保證寫作的有效性和目的性．審題主要要做到以下幾點：①分清層次和段落，切勿平鋪直敘，"一逗到底"．②句式﹑詞匯要盡量多樣，恰當使用較復雜的句式結構和較高級的詞匯．③文章銜接緊密，過渡自然，恰當使用好連接詞或過渡性詞匯．④注意書寫的整齊、美觀，并正確使用標點符號．
【亮點說明】這篇范文使用了高中教材中出現(xiàn)的詞匯，短語，語法，句式，如：At school，all the teachers work very hard，encouraging us to build up our confidence and inspiring us to improve our study．這句話用了現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語，Whenever we meet with difficulties，they are ready to come to our help．這句話用了讓步狀語從句，our school also provides good facilities for us students，for example the library stays open in the evenings and even on the weekends．這句話用了provide sth for sb"提供某人某物"，At home，our parents take good care of us and make sure we are well fed so that we can always be full of energy．這句話用了so that…引導的目的狀語從句，I'm very grateful for the efforts of our parents and teachers．I'm determined to try my best to prepare for the exam．這兩句話都用了不定式，還有范文中還有Meanwhile，這樣的關聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫．

解答      I'm a senior 3 student．The college entrance exam is on the way and everyone around us is trying their best to help us in different ways．At school，all the teachers work very hard，encouraging us to build up our confidence and inspiring us to improve our study．（高分句型）Whenever we meet with difficulties，they are ready to come to our help．（高分句型）Meanwhile，our school also provides good facilities for us students，for example the library stays open in the evenings and even on the weekends．At home，our parents take good care of us and make sure we are well fed so that we can always be full of energy．（高分句型）
     I'm very grateful for the efforts of our parents and teachers．I'm determined to try my best to prepare for the exam．I am sure that with their encouragement and timely help I'll be able to achieve my goal and be a useful person of our society in the near future．（高分句型）

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．

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