Tim Post at 10-3-2013 20:10 |
Hi,everyone, I'm a Senior 1 student.I can't get on well with my new classmates.I have no friends and I am feeling lonely and upset.What should I do? |
分析 考察提綱類(lèi)作文.本文的話(huà)題是如何正確面對(duì)心理壓力,告訴對(duì)方心理壓力是很正常的現(xiàn)象.對(duì)人的身心健康也有很大的影響,一定要引起重視,而且要積極地面對(duì)它.在采取措施方面要注意勞逸結(jié)合,多和家人朋友交流,緩解各種不適情況.寫(xiě)作時(shí)需要使用平時(shí)積累的層次關(guān)系的短語(yǔ),多使用被動(dòng),倒裝、虛擬來(lái)提升作文的美度.在平時(shí)寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)該多進(jìn)行閱讀,對(duì)閱讀過(guò)程中寫(xiě)的好的表達(dá)要進(jìn)行積累,并且學(xué)以致用,勤積累,多背誦,這樣才能作文才能穩(wěn)步的提升.
亮點(diǎn)句型一:Do you often say something that may hurt others feelings?你常說(shuō)些傷害別人感情的話(huà)嗎?本句是一個(gè)含有定語(yǔ)從句 that may hurt others feelings的句子,被修飾的先行詞是something,在定語(yǔ)從句中做主語(yǔ).
亮點(diǎn)句型二:Second,it's advisable to take an active part in various activities.第二,積極參加各種活動(dòng)是明智的.句中it是形式主語(yǔ),真正的主語(yǔ)是動(dòng)詞不定式to take an active part in various activities.
解答 Hi,Tim,
Sorry to hear that you're not getting along well with your new classmatesAs a student of your age,I understand your situation.Everyone needs friends and we are afraid of lonliness.So it's time for you to change your present situation.Here are some suggestions.【表達(dá)對(duì)Tim現(xiàn)狀的看法】
First of all,you should know why you can't get along with your classmates.Are you too busy to speak to your classmates first?Do you often say something that may hurt others feelings?(亮點(diǎn)句型一)If so,try to make a change.Second,it's advisable to take an active part in various activities.(亮點(diǎn)句型二)In doing so,you will become popular among your classmates.【提出建議】
Hope my suggestions may be of some help.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua.
點(diǎn)評(píng) 本文屬于提綱作文,動(dòng)筆前,一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn),理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義,不能遺漏要點(diǎn),跑題偏題.平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累,寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外,還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類(lèi)似的范文,這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果.
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