分析 這是一篇書信,文章開頭結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出,只需要表達(dá)清楚要點(diǎn).寫作時(shí)首先要注意文章的段落結(jié)構(gòu),因?yàn)檫@是回信,所以第一段應(yīng)該交代上封信的內(nèi)容,要解答的問題.第二段主要是給出筆者的建議.第三段總結(jié).其中第二段是重點(diǎn).
在表達(dá)要點(diǎn)是切記不能逐字逐句翻譯,不能用漢語式的表達(dá),這就需要用地道的英語句型,還要使用一些常用短語,這樣才能符合英語習(xí)慣.如:I have received and read your letter,in which you mentioned that you wanted to lose weight by dieting.這是非限制性定語從句的用法.還有It is only natural that young girls at your age hope to look beautiful./it is a good idea to do it by getting more exercise and changing unhealthy eating habits,it做形式主語也是英語中常用的句型.studying is the first thing to consider while appearance is the second.這句話中,while的用法也很巧妙.另外名詞性從句也是英語寫作中常用的,如:The most important thing is that you keep a positive attitude.我們?cè)趯懽髦幸炀毜倪\(yùn)用這些常用句型,而且要經(jīng)常嘗試不同的表達(dá)法,不能千篇一律,才能寫出好的文章.
解答 Dear Xiao Wang,
I have received and read your letter,in which you mentioned that you wanted to lose weight by dieting.
It is only natural that young girls at your age hope to look beautiful.(高分句型)However,in my opinion,health is more important than beauty.For a student,studying is the first thing to consider while appearance is the second.So do not let others'opinions affect your normal life.(表明觀點(diǎn))However,if you do want to lose weight,it is a good idea to do it by getting more exercise and changing unhealthy eating habits.The most important thing is that you keep a positive attitude,as it will help with your studies,and will also help you overcome difficulties in dieting.(高分句型)(提出建議)
I hope my advice will be helpful to you and I'm looking forward to your next letter.
Yours,
Li Hua
點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力.在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致,時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實(shí) 的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子;二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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