Question

請你根據(jù)以下提示，以My experience as a volunteer為題寫一篇短文給校辦刊物投稿，與讀者分享自己寒假做志愿者的經(jīng)歷：
時間： 寒假期間的每個周末；
主要活動：給老人打掃房間；給老人讀文章；帶領(lǐng)老人鍛煉身體；
體會：給老人帶來快樂；這次經(jīng)歷使自己更有愛心。
注意：
可根據(jù)內(nèi)容需要適當(dāng)拓展，以使行文連貫；
詞數(shù)100左右。
My experience as a volunteer

Answer 1

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My experience as a volunteer
During the winter vacation, I worked as a volunteer at a nursing home every weekend. As a volunteer, I cleaned the room for the old people in the morning. What’s more, I read articles for them, which helped them learn what was going on at home and abroad. Most of the old people were weak, so I took them to take exercise. And we played interesting games together. The old people there were satisfied with my work.
My volunteer experience has shown that I can bring joy to old people. It has made me a more caring person. In a word, my work as a volunteer is extremely rewarding!

試題分析：寫作時應(yīng)注意(1)認(rèn)真審題，確定體裁。這里是校辦刊物投稿，敘述自己以前的一次經(jīng)歷。(2)構(gòu)思要點。根據(jù)題目要求，理解要表達(dá)的要點．設(shè)計好文章的層次段落，考慮所用時態(tài)、人稱等，把要點串聯(lián)起來，構(gòu)成文章框架。(3)選詞造句，避難選易。在要點、層次明確的情況下，選用自己最熟悉的單詞、句式進(jìn)行造句．如果不會用復(fù)雜句就用簡單句表達(dá)要點．注意主謂語一致、人稱、數(shù)量、大小寫、標(biāo)點。(4)認(rèn)真檢查，避免錯誤。仔細(xì)閱讀全文，查找是否有錯，注意時態(tài)、單詞拼寫、字母大小寫、標(biāo)點是否有誤，句式是否正確．邏輯是否一致。
點評：應(yīng)該注意適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫，比如適當(dāng)選用表示因果、遞進(jìn)、轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的連接詞，使文章流暢、通順，并避免因反復(fù)使用句式相同的簡單句而造成的單調(diào)感。