Question

在日常生活中，英特網(wǎng)起著越來(lái)越重要的作用，越來(lái)越多的人用它來(lái)處理很多事情，然而也有人持懷疑態(tài)度，他們覺(jué)得英特網(wǎng)也有其弊端，請(qǐng)就“英特網(wǎng)對(duì)人們生活的影響”為題用英文寫(xiě)一篇文章。短文應(yīng)包括下表中的內(nèi)容：   

很多人認(rèn)為英特網(wǎng)優(yōu)點(diǎn)很多，其中包括：	網(wǎng)絡(luò)使用者可以通過(guò)英特網(wǎng)和各種領(lǐng)域的專家進(jìn)行溝通； 人們還可以利用網(wǎng)絡(luò)來(lái)建立社會(huì)關(guān)系； 身體有殘疾或者必須呆在家里的人可以和各方與自己有共同興趣的人通信或者溝通；
然而，一些人對(duì)此持有懷疑態(tài)度，他們認(rèn)為：	在網(wǎng)絡(luò)上有太多沒(méi)有經(jīng)過(guò)精確性評(píng)估的信息并且網(wǎng)絡(luò)正逐漸的改變?nèi)藗兪褂脮r(shí)間的方式； 花太多時(shí)間在網(wǎng)絡(luò)上的人更加傾向于和身邊的朋友以及周圍的世界脫離；
你對(duì)網(wǎng)絡(luò)的看法……

 
注意： 1．對(duì)所給要點(diǎn)，不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯，要有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2．詞數(shù)150左右。
The effects of the Internet on people’s lives

Answer 1

One possible version:
The effects of the Internet on people’s lives
As a new way of sharing information online, The Internet has won support with users of all ages. Of course,
different people have different opinions.
Some people think the Internet has its obvious benefits. Firstly, Internet users can communicate with experts
on all sorts of topics. Furthermore, another truly wonderful aspect of the Internet is the way people use it to build
social bonds. Also, people who are disabled and must stay in their homes can correspond and communicate with
others around the globe who have similar interests.
Yet, some people are skeptical,they think the main drawbacks of the Internet are that it has too much information that has not been evaluated for accuracy and that it is transforming the way people spend their time. More importantly, people who spend too much time on the Internet tend to withdraw from the people and the world around them.
As for me, every advantage has its disadvantage, with the development of the Internet, we should keep the balance between its benefits and drawbacks. Only by doing so, can we make the Internet truly service people.

試題分析：提綱作文要求考生根據(jù)所給的寫(xiě)作要求和提綱，確定文章的中心思想，然后緊緊圍繞中心思想展開(kāi)寫(xiě)作。本文的要點(diǎn)很全面，在個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)方面考生可以從一分為二的辯證法出發(fā)，建議我們使用因特網(wǎng)好的一方面，擯棄不好的另外一方面。要求考生在保證內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進(jìn)而用自己的語(yǔ)言來(lái)表達(dá)某種觀點(diǎn)或看法，增添了寫(xiě)作的靈活性，同時(shí)能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言表達(dá)能力。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：寫(xiě)好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫(xiě)作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌�必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。