Question

10．假如你是李華，你的朋友Tom邀請你下周去他們學校參加文化交流活動并向外國朋友介紹中國的傳統(tǒng)繪畫．但你忙于準備期中考試，不得不謝絕邀請．請根據下面的要點用英語寫一封信：
1．謝絕邀請
2．說明理由
3．推薦朋友Mary參加，并說明理由．
注意：1．詞數(shù)80左右；
     2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．信的開頭和結尾已為你寫好（不計入總詞數(shù)）．
Dear Tom，
Thank you very much for your invitation．
                                                                                           
Best wishes．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇謝絕邀請的信件，根據題目要求可知要利用第一人稱敘述，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主．內容主要分成三部分：一 表明書信的目的；二 說明謝絕的理由和推薦Mary的原因；三再次表達歉意．
1．I strongly recommend my friend Mary，who（引導定語從句，who代指Mary） is the most suitable choice to take my place next week．
我強烈推薦我的朋友Mary，她是下一周最適合代替我的人．
2．She began to learn painting at an early age and （連接并列句）has a good knowledge of the traditional Chinese painting，which（引導定語從句，which代指主句），together with her active personality and perfect spoken English，will help to make your activity a success
她在很小的時候就開始學習繪畫，熟知傳統(tǒng)的國畫，再加上她活潑的性格和完美的英文口語，她肯定會有助于讓你的活動成功．

解答 Dear Tom，
      Thank you very much for your invitation．I'd like to accept it and take this opportunity to introduce the traditional Chinese painting to foreign friends，but I'm sorry to inform you that I can't（謝絕邀請，表明寫信的原因）．
      The reason is that I am busy preparing myself for the coming final examination（ 說明理由）．I strongly recommend my friend Mary，who is the most suitable choice to take my place next week（高分句型一）．She began to learn painting at an early age and has a good knowledge of the traditional Chinese painting，which，together with her active personality and perfect spoken English，will help to make your activity a success（高分句型二）（推薦朋友Mary參加，并說明原因）．
      Sorry again for any inconvenience caused by my absence（再次表達歉意）．
      Best wishes．
                                                                                                                                                                                               Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                                Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．