Question

請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合事例，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。
We often hear people say, “Life is hard!” Faced with difficulties and even failures in life, people’s attitudes are different. Some feel optimistic(樂(lè)觀的) while others do not. Do be optimistic in your school life.
注意：①無(wú)須寫(xiě)標(biāo)題，不得照抄英語(yǔ)提示語(yǔ)；②除詩(shī)歌外，文體不限；③文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和名稱(chēng)；④詞數(shù)不少于120。
                                                                             
                                                                             

Answer 1

Life has taught me a lot, among which is that we should take an optimistic attitude towards life. When one is optimistic, he often foresees the hopes and actively tries to work out the problem.
There was a time when I was always No. One in the examination praised by teachers and admired by schoolmates. However, things changed when I entered this key school. I found I had great difficulty with my study and was left behind by many students. I got frustrated and felt pessimistic about my future. Luckily, it was at this very moment that my head teacher found this and encouraged me. With his timely help, I made steady progress. To me, life shows its sunshine and smiles again.
Just as a proverb says, “Life is a mirror. If you smile to life, life often smiles to you.” Having the optimistic attitude is the key in life.

解析試題分析：考查半開(kāi)放性作文寫(xiě)作。半開(kāi)放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在保證內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進(jìn)而用自己的語(yǔ)言來(lái)表達(dá)某種觀點(diǎn)或看法，增添了寫(xiě)作的靈活性，同時(shí)能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言表達(dá)能力。首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語(yǔ)來(lái)提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】所給范文語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔，應(yīng)用了一些較好的詞組和句子：work out 計(jì)算出，had great difficulty with 有困難，left behind 落后，With his timely help在他及時(shí)的幫助下, Life has taught me a lot, among which is that we should take an optimistic attitude towards life. 這句話用了定語(yǔ)從句， There was a time when I was always No. One in the examination praised by teachers and admired by schoolmates.這句話用了定語(yǔ)從句， it was at this very moment that my head teacher found this and encouraged me. 這句話用了強(qiáng)調(diào)句， Just as a proverb says, “Life is a mirror. If you smile to life, life often smiles to you.” 最后還使用了諺語(yǔ)。
考點(diǎn)：考查開(kāi)放式書(shū)面表達(dá)