你們學(xué)校最近做了一項(xiàng)調(diào)查,調(diào)查的主題是”你寒假會(huì)去做兼職掙錢嗎?”下面是調(diào)查結(jié)果:
結(jié) 果
原 因
 
89%選擇不去
父母不允許
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不知道自己能做什么工作
 
11%選擇去
學(xué)以致用
積累社會(huì)經(jīng)驗(yàn)
減輕父母的壓力
請(qǐng)你就此用英文寫(xiě)一篇文章.
注意: 1.詞數(shù)100左右;
2.可適當(dāng)拓展內(nèi)容以使行文連貫。
開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出,但不計(jì)入總數(shù)。
Recently our school has carried out a survey about whether students will do some part-time job during the winter holiday.
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Recently our school has carried out a survey about whether students will do some part-time job during the winter holiday.
89% of the students said no. First, their parents won’t allow them to do so. Second, they are so busy with their studies during the holiday that they can’t afford the time to do it. Third, they are not sure what job they can do. 11% of the students planned to work during the winter holiday. They think working is a good chance to put what they have learned into practice. Through work, they can gain lots of social experience. In addition, by doing a part-time job to earn some money, they can reduce their parents’ pressure..

試題分析:這是一篇典型的議論文體的寫(xiě)作,它以表格的形式提出了論點(diǎn)(寒假兼職的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn))和論據(jù),還以文字提示形式提出了話題(寒假是否會(huì)去做兼職賺錢)及需要考生自由發(fā)揮的部分(你的看法),自己的看法可選擇上述中的任何一種,并就此發(fā)表個(gè)人的見(jiàn)解。本文的重點(diǎn)是表格中兩種方式的優(yōu),缺點(diǎn),根據(jù)題目的特點(diǎn),以三段式的形式來(lái)寫(xiě)作比較好。根據(jù)內(nèi)容,盡管討論已經(jīng)發(fā)生,但它是就一般的暑假假期計(jì)劃而進(jìn)行的討論,沒(méi)有特定的時(shí)間界定,因而考生應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)為主。相當(dāng)一部分考生用一般過(guò)去時(shí)進(jìn)行論述,這會(huì)失掉較多的分?jǐn)?shù)。從題目所給的開(kāi)頭可知應(yīng)用第一人稱來(lái)寫(xiě)。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文章結(jié)構(gòu)層次清楚,觀點(diǎn)明確,語(yǔ)言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確,多用詞組和句式: Allow sb. to do “允許某人做”,. they are so busy with their studies during the holiday that they can’t afford the time to do it. 這句話用了so…that…句型, they are not sure what job they can do. They think working is a good chance to put what they have learned into practice. 這兩句話用了賓語(yǔ)從句還有范文還使用了 First, Second, Third, In addition,這些關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫。
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