Question

你是成都七中高三年級(jí)的一名學(xué)生，今年即將高中畢業(yè)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面所給的要點(diǎn)提示，就關(guān)于“高考志愿選擇”用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，向?qū)W校New Babel英語(yǔ)雜志投稿，描述學(xué)生中存在的兩種想法。

	觀 點(diǎn)	理 由
1	首先選擇專業(yè)	1．個(gè)人興趣       2．社會(huì)需求
2	首先選擇大學(xué)	1．眾多課程選擇   2．求職更受青睞
3	你的看法并說(shuō)明原因

注意：
1．詞數(shù)：120左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．文章開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
A good major or a good university?
Every student will be faced with the choice when he passes the College Entrance Examination. Should he choose a good major or a good university first?
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Answer 1

A good major or a good university
Every student will be faced with the choice when he passes the College Entrance Examination. Should he choose a good major or a good university first? Different students will offer different answers.
Some students think the choice should be based on their own interests, which makes it possible for them to take their favorite jobs in the future. Or they should select major according to the need of society. Those who think differently believe that a good university provides a wide range of courses which may be important to one’s development and that graduates from leading universities are often more likely to find a good job.
Personally, the best choice is a good major at a good university. If we cannot obtain both, the first thing to consider is a good major, because no matter where we study, we can still achieve a lot in a certain field if we try our best.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類書(shū)面表達(dá)，文章的要點(diǎn)也基本上都給出來(lái)了，而且很具體，考生要把要點(diǎn)解釋清楚，不能有遺漏。除了表達(dá)這些要點(diǎn)以外，還要闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)，這就要求考生自己拓展發(fā)揮，在寫作的過(guò)程中，要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型，如強(qiáng)調(diào)句，倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次。同時(shí)在列舉措施的時(shí)候要使用合適的連接詞如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，讓文章看起來(lái)很有條理，也很流暢。本篇文章在寫作時(shí)不要啰嗦，力求簡(jiǎn)潔。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】所給范文語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔，運(yùn)用了一些詞組：be based on“以…為基礎(chǔ)”， according to“根據(jù)”， a wide range of“各種各樣的”，范文中的句式多變，運(yùn)用不同的語(yǔ)法知識(shí)： Some students think the choice should be based on their own interests, which makes it possible for them to take their favorite jobs in the future. 這句話用了非限制性定語(yǔ)從句和it做形式賓語(yǔ)。Those who think differently believe that a good university provides a wide range of courses which may be important to one’s development and that graduates from leading universities are often more likely to find a good job. 這句話是長(zhǎng)句，包括兩個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句和兩個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句， If we cannot obtain both, the first thing to consider is a good major, because no matter where we study, we can still achieve a lot in a certain field if we try our best.這句話用了不定式和狀語(yǔ)從句。