Question

5．請以下列詞組為關(guān)鍵線索，寫一篇以"Makeourcitiesgreener"為標(biāo)題的英語短文．
fewer trees          many advantages          more efforts
注意：
1．必須使用所給的3個關(guān)鍵詞組；
2．詞數(shù)不少于120個．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱類作文，根據(jù)所給關(guān)鍵線索，寫一篇英語短文，內(nèi)容關(guān)于使我們的城市更環(huán)保，寫作時應(yīng)包含所給關(guān)鍵詞：越來越少的樹；許多優(yōu)點；更多的努力．寫作要點：1．城市環(huán)境現(xiàn)狀；2．環(huán)保的意義；3．號召呼吁大家共同努力．
重點短語：
prevent sb from doing（阻止某人做某事）；think of （思考）；take action to（采取行動做某事）
高分句型：
1．With industries and business developing quickly，there are fewer trees around us．With the number of trees in many big cities reducing dramatically，efforts are being made to prevent people from cutting more trees．這兩句話為形式一致的排比句，并靈活地運用了詞匯及短語，詳細描述了環(huán)境現(xiàn)狀．
2．People in every field should not only know about the importance of keeping the quality of urban environment，but also take common action to plant more trees and flowers so as to improve our living conditions．該句運用了in every field；the number of；the quality of；take action to等短語，呼吁號召大家共同努力環(huán)保．

解答 Make Our Cities Greener
With industries and business developing quickly，there are fewer trees around us．With the number of trees in many big cities reducing dramatically，efforts are being made to prevent people from cutting more trees．But a lot of trees are being destroyed by people who have never thought of the importance of green plants．Making cities greener has many advantages．（環(huán)境現(xiàn)狀）
First，it can make our air cleaner．Some researchers have proved that trees can reduce the amount of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere through absorption．Second，it can make our cities more beautiful．With trees and flowers everywhere，living conditions can be improved．Finally，it can produce timber----an effective way to solve the problems of limited supply of natural resources．（環(huán)保意義）
Making our cities greener requires more efforts．People in every field should not only know about the importance of keeping the quality of urban environment，but also take common action to plant more trees and flowers so as to improve our living conditions．（呼吁及號召）

點評 提綱類作文在寫作時要注意內(nèi)容是否切合所給主題，包含所給要點，寫作時注意正確運用時態(tài)，上下文注意連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需要注意積累短語和重要句型．