Question

11．It is known to all that it is diligence that makes up for the deficiency．（ 勤能補拙 ）
注意：
1、無須寫標(biāo)題，不得照抄英語提示語；
2、除詩歌之外，文體不限；
3、內(nèi)容必須結(jié)合生活學(xué)習(xí)中的一個事例；
4、文中不得透露個人姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
5、詞數(shù)為120左右．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇話題類作文，談?wù)勀銓?It is known to all that it is diligence that makes up for the deficiency．（ 勤能補拙 ）這句話的看法．所以首先必須讀懂這句話，并且要用第一人稱來寫．寫作時不能只是生硬的寫出這句話的意思，一定要結(jié)合實際，舉例說明自己的理解．需要注意不要偏離文章中心，寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合作文的主題，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題．盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．同時注意題目要求100詞左右，不能寫太多，也不能寫太少，適中即可．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：
Diligence makes up for the deficiency，which means that hard work can compensate for weaknesses．（高分句型一）make up for 彌補；句中有which引導(dǎo)的定語從句
 It was when he was 17 that he attended the middle school．（高分句型二）It is/was…that/who…屬于強調(diào)句型
Poor as he was in Math，he didn't give up，because he held the belief that diligence makes up for the deficiency．（高分句型三）句中使用了as引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句．使用了倒裝，句中還有that 引導(dǎo)的同位語從句
In a nutshell，diligence，which can make up for the deficiency，is not only a positive attitude towards life but also a reliable way to guide us toward success．（高分句型四）句中有which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句；not only…but also…不僅…而且…屬于固定表達

解答 Diligence makes up for the deficiency，which means that hard work can compensate for weaknesses．（高分句型一）To my way of thinking，diligence is of great importance to our study and work．（點明主題）
      Take Tong Dizhou，the famous Chinese biologist，for example．It was when he was 17 that he attended the middle school．（高分句型二）Poor as he was in Math，he didn't give up，because he held the belief that diligence makes up for the deficiency．（高分句型三）Determined to catch up with his classmates，he got up early to read．Only after he reviewed what he learned in the daytime did he go to bed．At length，he became a world famous biologist．From his experience，it is safe to say it's diligence that really makes a difference．（舉例論證）
      In a nutshell，diligence，which can make up for the deficiency，is not only a positive attitude towards life but also a reliable way to guide us toward success．（高分句型四）So，everybody，be diligent and your efforts will pay off．（個人感想）

點評 本文屬于話題類作文，動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題．平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果．．