16.2010年以來,我國相繼發(fā)生了幾起校園暴力事件,使國人為之震驚,震驚之余,大家都陷入了沉思:我們該如何加強(qiáng)校園安全呢?請你以How to improve school safety為題,寫一篇120詞左右的短文.
參考詞匯:校園campus 保安security guard.

分析 本文考查開放性作文的寫作要求考生,就我國相繼發(fā)生的幾起校園暴力事件,反思我們該如何加強(qiáng)校園安全呢?沒有什么要點(diǎn)給出,考生可以選擇自己了解的事例進(jìn)行描述,合理組織語言,也可以合理的想象,運(yùn)用自己能夠掌握的語言技能合理的寫作.開放性作文的難度較大,要求考生自己根據(jù)文章內(nèi)容梳理要點(diǎn),然后在整理成文,在寫作時(shí)要合理運(yùn)用連接詞和高級詞匯高級句型,讓文章更有層次.
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種表達(dá):
Greaat efforts should be made by the school to make sure the campus is safe.(高分句型一)make sure 確保  make efforts 作出努力
Besides,the school security guards should walk around the campus from time to time so that some bad people can be frightened away.(高分句型二)from time to time 不時(shí)地;besides,另外
As for us students,we should keep safety in mind whatever we do.(高分句型三)as for 至于,關(guān)于;keep…in mind 牢記

解答 How to improve the school safety
     School safety is a matter of great importance.Greaat efforts should be made by the school to make sure the campus is safe.(高分句型一)(點(diǎn)明本文主題)Firstly,nobody should be allowed to enter the school without permission.The school guard should check everyone entering the school strictly.Besides,the school security guards should walk around the campus from time to time so that some bad people can be frightened away.(高分句型二)More importantly,school safety education should be offered by the school.Students can be taught what to do when faced with danger.(提出應(yīng)對措施)
     As for us students,we should keep safety in mind whatever we do.(高分句型三)We shouldn't trust strangers or give away our personal information to them.(發(fā)出呼吁)

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力.在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致,時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子;二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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