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4．近年來(lái)，部分學(xué)校的運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)花費(fèi)越來(lái)越高．現(xiàn)在，請(qǐng)你就此現(xiàn)象，按以下提示，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文．
1）花費(fèi)增髙體現(xiàn)：買(mǎi)運(yùn)動(dòng)服、做海報(bào)等；
2）相應(yīng)弊端：造成浪費(fèi)、增加負(fù)擔(dān)；
3）提出建議：培養(yǎng)團(tuán)隊(duì)意識(shí)、減壓和娛樂(lè)．
注意：1）詞數(shù)：100宇左右；
2）文中不得出現(xiàn)你本人和學(xué)校的真實(shí)名字；
3）短文的開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)出，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：校運(yùn)會(huì) the school sports meeting
In recent years，some school sports meetings have cost more and more．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱類作文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主．內(nèi)容包括：一 部分學(xué)校的運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)存在的花費(fèi)增髙的弊端；二 提出建議．
高分句型：
1．For example，it is typical of more and more students to purchase the sports uniforms，which（which引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句，代指the sports uniforms） they don't usually wear in their daily life．句子里it is typical of sb to do sth表示"對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)，做某事是典型的"．
例如，越來(lái)越多的學(xué)生往往會(huì)買(mǎi)運(yùn)動(dòng)服，而在平時(shí)他們根本就不穿．
2．In my opinion，when （when引導(dǎo)狀語(yǔ)從句）we are having a school sports meeting，we'd better focus on the sports events themselves，try to develop the team spirit，relieve our pressure and get fun as well．句子里 focus，try，relieve，get是并列關(guān)系的動(dòng)詞，做had better 的賓語(yǔ)．
依我看來(lái)，當(dāng)我們參加運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)的時(shí)候，我們最好關(guān)注運(yùn)動(dòng)項(xiàng)目本身，努力養(yǎng)成團(tuán)隊(duì)精神，緩解壓力并且得到樂(lè)趣．

解答 In recent years，some school sports meetings have cost more and more．For example，it is typical of more and more students to purchase the sports uniforms，which they don't usually wear in their daily life【高分句型一】．Besides，posters and slogans for the sports meetings are made almost every time，which usually cost a large amount of money．And unfortunately，these behaviors result in a big waste of money and they will also put a heavy burden on our parents．（部分學(xué)校的運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)存在的花費(fèi)增髙的弊端）
     In my opinion，when we are having a school sports meeting，we'd better focus on the sports events themselves，try to develop the team spirit，relieve our pressure and get fun as well．【高分句型二】（提出建議）

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