Question

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均限一詞。
2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。
After watch “English TV” last Sunday morning, I called my classmate and asked him to go to see a film in the afternoon. Before the film was over, we returned to school to do our lessons. While we are having a rest in the corridor, I saw Mr. Liu, my head teacher. He told me that we had made some progresses in English, but my Chinese lagged behind, especially my Chinese composition. He suggested I must read more and keeping a diary every day. In the evening my father told me that reading newspapers would do me well to improving my writing. That was really good idea! That they said was quite right, and I should follow their advice.

Answer 1

【小題1】watch→watching
【小題2】Before→After/ When
【小題3】are→were
【小題4】He told me that we → I
【小題5】progresses→progress
【小題6】must→should   (或去掉must)
【小題7】keeping→keep
【小題8】well→good
【小題9】really ∧good→a  
【小題10】That→What

解析試題分析：文章介紹作者的英語(yǔ)有了提高，但是語(yǔ)文不太好，老師和爸爸都給了他一些建議，他會(huì)聽他們的建議的。
【小題1】在看完電視英語(yǔ)后，我打電話給同學(xué)問他是否能和我去看電影。After后面接動(dòng)名詞：watch→watching
【小題2】在電影結(jié)束后，我們回到學(xué)校做功課。Before→After/ When
【小題3】當(dāng)我們?cè)谧呃刃菹⒌臅r(shí)候…，這是上星期發(fā)生的事情，用一般過去式：are→were   
【小題4】從后面的句子：but my Chinese lagged behind, especially my Chinese composition. 可知老師是和我說的：He told me that we → I
【小題5】我的英語(yǔ)取得了進(jìn)步。Make  progress取得進(jìn)步
【小題6】他建議我多讀書，每天記日記。主句的謂語(yǔ)是suggest謂語(yǔ)是用虛擬語(yǔ)氣： must→should    (或去掉must)
【小題7】read和keep是并列的
【小題8】do sb good對(duì)…有好處：well→good
【小題9】這真是一個(gè)好主意：really ∧good→a
【小題10】他們說的話很對(duì)，我會(huì)聽他們的建議。What引導(dǎo)主語(yǔ)從句，在主語(yǔ)從句中做賓語(yǔ)
考點(diǎn)：考查短文改錯(cuò)