Question

“地球一小時(shí)”是世界自然基金會(huì)(WWF)為應(yīng)對(duì)全球氣候變化所提出的一項(xiàng)倡議，希望個(gè)人、社區(qū)、企業(yè)和政府在特定的時(shí)間熄燈一小時(shí)，來(lái)表明他們應(yīng)對(duì)氣候變化行動(dòng)的支持。
請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一份不少于l00詞的英文倡議書(shū)，動(dòng)員大家加入“地球一小時(shí),人類一大步”活動(dòng)。要點(diǎn)如下：
1. 地球面臨的氣候威脅；
2. 鼓勵(lì)同學(xué)們關(guān)燈或其他電器一小時(shí)；
3. 發(fā)動(dòng)身邊的每個(gè)人參與；
4. 養(yǎng)成節(jié)能的習(xí)慣，為環(huán)保作更大貢獻(xiàn)。
參考詞匯：氣候climate；威脅threat；把……關(guān)掉switch off
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Answer 1

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With the global climate becoming warmer and warmer, our earth is faced with great threat. As a senior school student, I believe it is everyone’s duty to do something to save our home. Earth Hour is an activity that we can take part in. Let’s switch off our lights and computers, etc. for one hour at a certain time. It’s an easy job for us but a huge amount of energy will be saved if all of us do it together. More people will realize the problem our earth faces and will start to take action. Let’s develop the good habit of saving energy in our daily life and try to make more contributions to our environment.

試題分析：題目要求寫(xiě)一份英文倡議書(shū)，呼吁大家加入“地球一小時(shí),人類一大步”的環(huán)�；顒�(dòng)。作文要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)列出，但不要局限于只翻譯每個(gè)要點(diǎn)，還要注意作文的上下文銜接。使用第一人稱來(lái)寫(xiě)，這樣能更有說(shuō)服力。多使用高級(jí)詞匯和重要句型，注意卷面的整潔。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文使用短語(yǔ)is faced with, take part in, switch off, take action, make contributions to等，使作文內(nèi)容比較充實(shí)。范文使用了較多的重要句型：with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)With the global climate becoming；固定句型it is everyone’s duty to do...；定語(yǔ)從句an activity that we can和the problem our earth faces。范文最后使用祈使句Let’s...來(lái)動(dòng)員大家參與進(jìn)來(lái)，達(dá)到了寫(xiě)作的目的。