Question

學(xué)校英語(yǔ)論壇對(duì)是否需要安裝"綠壩——花季護(hù)航"軟件(the software Green Dam —Youth Escort)以保證學(xué)生健康上網(wǎng)一事展開了一場(chǎng)激烈的討論。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合下列正反理由,在論壇上發(fā)貼來(lái)闡述一下你個(gè)人對(duì)此問(wèn)題的看法。
詞數(shù): 100詞左右。
支持理由
1. 安裝容易，操作簡(jiǎn)單，便于家長(zhǎng)監(jiān)控孩子的上網(wǎng)活動(dòng)；
2. 能過(guò)濾一些黃色網(wǎng)站，幫助我們營(yíng)造一個(gè)健康的互聯(lián)網(wǎng)環(huán)境。
反對(duì)理由
1. 不能從根本上解決學(xué)生瀏覽不良網(wǎng)站的問(wèn)題；
2. 國(guó)家每年為此耗資巨大；
3. 軟件本身不成熟，經(jīng)常出錯(cuò)誤。
你的觀點(diǎn)？
參考詞匯:
安裝install；過(guò)濾filter；黃色網(wǎng)站porn web-site
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Answer 1

One possible version:
There is no doubt that we should protect students from harmful websites. But we argue about whether we should install the software Green Dam —Youth Escort.
There are two main reasons why we should install the software. First, the software is easy to install and use. It is convenient for parents to watch over their children’s net activities. Second, it can filter some porn websites, which will help us get a healthy Internet environment. However, some think it cannot protect students from all harmful websites. It costs the government too much every year. Even worse, it is not well-developed and always makes some mistakes.
As for me, I think we should install the software. After all, it has more advantages than disadvantages.

解析試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)為正反方議論文。討論是否需要安裝"綠壩——花季護(hù)航"軟件以保證學(xué)生健康上網(wǎng)一事展開了一場(chǎng)激烈的討論。要寫出贊同的觀點(diǎn)和反對(duì)的觀點(diǎn)以及自己的觀點(diǎn)。文章結(jié)構(gòu)為：①引入句→②正方觀點(diǎn)闡述→③反方觀點(diǎn)闡述→④自己的觀點(diǎn)，論述兩種不同觀點(diǎn)主要是結(jié)合要點(diǎn)寫，要注意遣詞造句，自己的看法沒(méi)有要點(diǎn)要學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮。要求學(xué)生有很好的英語(yǔ)思維能力。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】用了一個(gè)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句it can filter some porn websites, which will help us get a healthy Internet environment.；還用了適當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞把句子連起來(lái)，如：first，second，Even worse, As for me等。
考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。