Question

假定你是李華，你的美國(guó)老師Miss Morgan要求你們明天下午去聽一個(gè)有關(guān)美國(guó)文化的講座。你因故不能參加。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，寫一封短信向Miss Morgan請(qǐng)假。
內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：
表示歉意
理由：去機(jī)場(chǎng)接從法國(guó)回來(lái)的舅舅
詢問(wèn)：是否有講座錄音，以便補(bǔ)聽講座
注意： 1. 詞數(shù)：100詞左右
2. 可根據(jù)內(nèi)容適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫
3. 參考詞匯：請(qǐng)假--- ask for leave of absence
彌補(bǔ)--- make up for
Dear Miss Morgan,
I’m so sorry that                                                
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
Thank you.
Yours sincerely ,
Li Hua

Answer 1

One possible version:
Dear Miss Morgan,
I’m so sorry that I won’t be able to attend the lecture on American culture tomorrow afternoon.
My uncle is returning home from France , and I’ve promised to meet him at the airport at 3:30tomorrow afternoon.
I’m very interested in American society and culture. I wonder if it is possible for the talk to be recorded , and if so , could I borrow the tape?  It would mean a great deal to me to listen to the tape and make up for what is covered in the talk. I would appreciate it if you could allow me to ask for leave of absence.
Thank you .
Yours sincerely
Li Hua

解析試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)是要求寫一封信。同學(xué)們對(duì)于書信這種題材已經(jīng)非常熟悉，而且要求內(nèi)容比較簡(jiǎn)單。同學(xué)們?cè)趯懽鲿r(shí)要注意書信的格式要正確，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，而且要適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫，順暢。此外本文是向老師請(qǐng)假，要注意語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔明了，語(yǔ)氣委婉客氣。在時(shí)態(tài)方面要根據(jù)情況恰當(dāng)選擇。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文章要點(diǎn)全面，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。使用簡(jiǎn)單的語(yǔ)言表述了不能出席的理由以及自己的請(qǐng)求，敘述清晰明了，不拖泥帶水。文中I wonder if it is possible for the talk to be recorded , and if so , could I borrow the tape?以及I would appreciate it if you could allow me to ask for leave of absence.等表述請(qǐng)求部分用詞準(zhǔn)確貼切，語(yǔ)氣委婉禮貌，顯示了作者對(duì)語(yǔ)言很強(qiáng)的運(yùn)用能力。
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